KYAA PESH KAROO.N-2 (inspired by dolly ji poem)

by qalb on April 15, 2012, 12:20:00 PM
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                         maikhaana pesh karoo.n jaam pesh karoo.n.
                         ghulaamee apnee umr-e-tamaam pesh karoo.n.

                         haalat dekh meree aashiqee bhee tadpe hai.
                         kyaa tumhein mohabbat ka anjaam pesh karoo.n.

                         ujaale  mein  tum  kabhee  nikalte  nahin ho.
                         muskuraatee  huee kyaa koee shaam pesh karoo.n.

                         naa ashiqee, naa diwaangee, na justjoo lage.
                         apnee mohabbat ka ab kyaa naam pesh karoo.n.

                         ghazal, nazm, sher, kya kya na sunaya qalb.
                         tu hee bataa tujhe ab kya payaam pesh karoo.n.


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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2012, 12:44:43 PM »
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Wow qalb bhai bhut khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2012, 12:47:11 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2012, 01:01:41 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2012, 01:04:20 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Qalb jee
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«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2012, 01:35:33 PM »
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vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob qalb jee
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                         maikhaana pesh karoo.n jaam pesh karoo.n.
                         ghulaamee apnee umr-e-tamaam pesh karoo.n.

                         haalat dekh meree aashiqee bhee tadpe hai.
                         kyaa tumhein mohabbat ka anjaam pesh karoo.n.

                         ujaale  mein  tum  kabhee  nikalte  nahin ho.
                         muskuraatee  huee kyaa koee shaam pesh karoo.n.

                         naa ashiqee, naa diwaangee, na justjoo lage.
                         apnee mohabbat ka ab kyaa naam pesh karoo.n.

                         ghazal, nazm, sher, kya kya na sunaya qalb.
                         tu hee bataa tujhe ab kya payaam pesh karoo.n.


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«Reply #8 on: April 15, 2012, 02:59:42 PM »
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Qalb Jee Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab... kin khayaaloN meiN uljhe huye haiN
Ajag hi kalaam pesh kar gaye janab... Huh?

Par ashaar khoob rahe... sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik
rahe... Usual Smile Humari daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #10 on: April 15, 2012, 03:59:29 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: April 15, 2012, 06:04:44 PM »
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                         maikhaana pesh karoo.n jaam pesh karoo.n.
                         ghulaamee apnee umr-e-tamaam pesh karoo.n.

                         haalat dekh meree aashiqee bhee tadpe hai.
                         kyaa tumhein mohabbat ka anjaam pesh karoo.n.

                         ujaale  mein  tum  kabhee  nikalte  nahin ho.
                         muskuraatee  huee kyaa koee shaam pesh karoo.n.

                         naa ashiqee, naa diwaangee, na justjoo lage.
                         apnee mohabbat ka ab kyaa naam pesh karoo.n.

                         ghazal, nazm, sher, kya kya na sunaya qalb.
                         tu hee bataa tujhe ab kya payaam pesh karoo.n.


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«Reply #12 on: April 15, 2012, 06:38:15 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: April 15, 2012, 08:46:23 PM »
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Bahut khoob!!! Qalbji...kya baat hai!
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«Reply #14 on: April 16, 2012, 06:42:02 AM »
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                         maikhaana pesh karoo.n jaam pesh karoo.n.
                         ghulaamee apnee umr-e-tamaam pesh karoo.n.

                         haalat dekh meree aashiqee bhee tadpe hai.
                         kyaa tumhein mohabbat ka anjaam pesh karoo.n.

                         ujaale  mein  tum  kabhee  nikalte  nahin ho.
                         muskuraatee  huee kyaa koee shaam pesh karoo.n.

                         naa ashiqee, naa diwaangee, na justjoo lage.
                         apnee mohabbat ka ab kyaa naam pesh karoo.n.

                         ghazal, nazm, sher, kya kya na sunaya qalb.
                         tu hee bataa tujhe ab kya payaam pesh karoo.n.


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Usual Smile..Usual Smile...kiiiyaa baat hai qalb jii..bahut khoob..waah....sbi taarif kr chuke hain.....n very quickk..:)jet plane ki tarah....Usual Smile..waise aap bade high level k shayar hain....so honour fr me..Usual Smile.....daad ......
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