-Ladies First-

by HumTum is back on April 19, 2007, 02:27:52 PM
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Subah subah Yamduut  mere darwaje par aaya
Knock kar ke jor se, Halka sa Muskurayya
 
Bola bete aaja, Tere Pran chahiye Just,
Mene wife ko aage kiya bola 'Ladies First'
 
Yamdut bola hatao ise mere saamne se, me darr raha huN
Meine kaha pichle 2 saal se isike ssath gujara ka raha huN
 
Sun ke yamdut ne fir ek baar khujaya apana Sar
Bola tuje marne ki kya jarrurat, Tu to yahiN marr !!
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2007, 04:44:32 PM »
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Humorous.. very nice.. Usual Smile ..

Now on I will give some rating .. ie. out of 10.. so that one can understand how I like it..

I give 8/10 .. Usual Smile Too good. !
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2007, 09:40:35 AM »
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Thanks very much Ricky !!


Bhai bhai ke beech ab dewaar ban gyi
Jab se begum ki ghar mein sarkar ban gyi
Hai majaal ke saas sarur do lafz bhi bole
Jab se begum ghar ki thaanedaar ban gyi !!
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2007, 12:06:41 PM »
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bahut ache humtum
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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2007, 01:58:09 PM »
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ha ha ha bahoot khoob HumTum ji..

atte hi dhamal machate ho
na jaane kaha phir gayab ho jaate ho
do line bhi kikh kar ja nahi sakte
kyun dosto ka sabar ajmaate ho
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2007, 06:53:52 PM »
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Lolzzzzzzz HuMTuM .... Winking

zamana se aisa hi hota aaya hai
shaadi ke baad, pati eksar rota hai
mauj masti ke din aur suhani raaten
shaadi ke baad, pati ka khota hai
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«Reply #6 on: May 04, 2007, 05:18:22 PM »
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nice job all...
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2007, 06:09:47 PM »
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nice hum tum and majid
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2007, 06:09:47 PM »
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nice hum tum and majid
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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2007, 06:17:11 PM »
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ek sy bhar ek haie lajawab
good
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