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luv ka keeda kaat gaya yun
kach kach kach-
soona dil dhadka gaya yun
dhak dhak dhak-
sshhh man bagiya me aya koi
pyar ke FOOl khilaya koi
aankh se aankh milaya ko
nigahon se dil me samaya koi
saagar si lahrahat thi
kuch azeeb si ghabrahat thi
angaron si aankhen uski
dahak dahak dahakti thi
ujle kiran sa mukhda uska
cham cham chamakti thi
zulfen thi ya ghangor ghata
man ka mayura bas
fudak fudak utha
sapna suhaana aisa tha
kya bataun jaane wo kaisa tha !!!
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«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2011, 10:25:39 AM » |
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wah wah niralaji...
khub keeda kata hai yar....
wah
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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2011, 10:29:25 AM » |
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hehehe ye luv bhayanak chij hoti hai yar.
hai na
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«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2011, 10:32:09 AM » |
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hun.... bhayanak nahin..... dardnak hota haiji...
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2011, 11:25:31 AM » |
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ohhh iska matlab Naak me bahut Dard hota hai --
hai na
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2011, 11:33:16 AM » |
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nahinji dard to dil main hi hota hai par dard se ansu bahete hain aur naak bhi...
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2011, 11:43:27 AM » |
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hame nai karna ye bekaar si chij.
iss keede ko aaj hi Begon Spray se maar denge hum
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2011, 11:45:02 AM » |
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are nahin ye dard ka keeda hai ise jinda rakhiya..ji han katne mat dijie.
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2011, 11:49:14 AM » |
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na ji na risk lena hi nai hai ab to. keeda zinda rahega to kabhi na kabhi kaat hi khayega. fir naak bhi bahega  paltu kutta bhi to kabhi kabar kaat leta hai na ! |
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2011, 11:51:56 AM » |
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wahji... kya baat hai...
par janab ye keeda bhi to pyar ka hai...
aur ye marta nahin hai ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 13, 2011, 12:00:06 PM » |
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"
aaj to iss keede ke saath mere armaano ka bhi khooooo hoga
ghani zulfon ke chaw me bhi
ruh ko tadpaata dardNaak dhoo dhoo hoga
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aji hamari ichha hai--
pyar ka defin humare liye alg hai--
pyar srf pyar hai--sachha pyar
wo hai jisme na koi tadap na zalan aur na kuch paane ki aas na khone ka gam ho.
bs yar dildaar ki aankhe nam na ho.
wo wesa pyar aajkal kahan hai ji.
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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2011, 12:06:58 PM » |
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wahji... wah... par har koi esa nahin hota.. kuch log jisse pyar karte hain usi ko ansuon main dubo dete hain... wah khub...
thanks
ab fir milenge aap reply likhiye ham kal aapko fir khushi ka geet sunaenge
tab tak intzar......
kal ka
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«Reply #12 on: January 13, 2011, 12:21:06 PM » |
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ok ji thanx.
ab pyar karnewala hi behtar janta hai.
"
ye thi khabren
Aaj Tak
intezaar kijiye
Kal Tak
tata
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thanx
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«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2011, 12:26:17 PM » |
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bada khatarnak keeda h ye aapke love ka nirala mastana ji.........
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«Reply #14 on: January 13, 2011, 01:10:33 PM » |
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haan ji  wese dhanyabaad K mam. " thanx " |
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