MAA KEE KHAWAHISH .!

by qalb on May 21, 2012, 10:13:06 AM
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                             mujhe  sajaayaa gayaa.
                             dulhaa  banaayaa gayaa.

                             waqt   baraat   kaa.
                             sabko   batayaa   gayaa.

                             anokhee   shadee  thee.
                             dhol   bajaayaa   gaya.

                             ek  din  ka  ghudsawaar.
                             ghodee pe bithayaa gayaa.

                             dus-dus   saaliyo.n  se.
                             bahut   satayaa   gayaa.

                             khulee  aankh jab meree.
                             ye    samjhayaa   gayaa.

                             bataa  kar  dulhan  use.
                             ghar   le  jaayaa  gaya.

                             maa  kee khawahish ko qalb.
                             aise   nibhaayaa  gayaa.


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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2012, 10:28:52 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2012, 10:55:20 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2012, 05:22:37 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2012, 06:10:24 PM »
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Vaaah ,,baahut khoob Qalb jee
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humko  na bulaaya gayaa

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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2012, 12:41:22 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: June 24, 2012, 05:51:08 PM »
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Beautiful creation Qalb saheb, bahut hi khoob.
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2012, 07:31:08 PM »
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