Mazahiya sher

by @kaash on April 30, 2010, 12:27:20 PM
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pls take it sportively

hum hi se seekhte ho hum hi par likhte ho hum hi se daad bhi chahte ho
mere dost kya kahen aakhir dost ho par kyun nahi kuch alag likhna bhi shuru karte ho

dekho murge ke baagh dene se savera ho hi jata hai
savera hone se pehle hi kyun kukdoo ku shuru karte ho

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2010, 12:37:09 PM »
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theek kahaa kaashji

aap hi se seekhte hain .
aap hi ko daad dete hai.
kya kare aajkal itne jo welle hain.  Both Thumbs Up Both Thumbs Up laughing8 laughing8 laughing8 laughing8

aajkal kahaan koi murgaa baang deta hai.
de bhi de to kahaan koi uski baang se uthataa hai.
saveraa hone ka intezaar kyun karen.
aajkal andheraa hotaa hi kahaan hai.

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riyaz106
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2010, 12:55:09 PM »
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Kash ji bahot achha thread shuru kiya hai. Ye chalta rahna chahiye.
Aapne bahot achha tanz likha hai.
pls take it sportively

hum hi se seekhte ho hum hi par likhte ho hum hi se daad bhi chahte ho
mere dost kya kahen aakhir dost ho par kyun nahi kuch alag likhna bhi shuru karte ho

dekho murge ke baagh dene se savera ho hi jata hai
savera hone se pehle hi kyun kukdoo ku shuru karte ho

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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riyaz106
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2010, 12:57:19 PM »
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Suresh ji aapne to kamaal hi kar diya. Ye hazir jawabi ki ek misaal hai ke fauran poem ka jawab poem se diya. Jo hazir jawaab hote hain wo zaheen hote hain.
theek kahaa kaashji

aap hi se seekhte hain .
aap hi ko daad dete hai.
kya kare aajkal itne jo welle hain.  Both Thumbs Up Both Thumbs Up laughing8 laughing8 laughing8 laughing8

aajkal kahaan koi murgaa baang deta hai.
de bhi de to kahaan koi uski baang se uthataa hai.
saveraa hone ka intezaar kyun karen.
aajkal andheraa hotaa hi kahaan hai.


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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2010, 01:03:29 PM »
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bahut sara shukriya Riyaz ji .

Roke se ruktaa hai jawab mera.
there is equal and opposite reaction to an action. Newton said.
what can I do.
its a nature.
Suresh ji aapne to kamaal hi kar diya. Ye hazir jawabi ki ek misaal hai ke fauran poem ka jawab poem se diya. Jo hazir jawaab hote hain wo zaheen hote hain.
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neelgold
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2010, 10:43:55 PM »
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Vry Gud Reply SUresh Ji ........ Lyk it

No one is free hre....Lyf is so bzy.... no ons has tym 4 anythng ...
Agr koi yeh samzta hai to uski bhut badi bhool hai

theek kahaa kaashji

aap hi se seekhte hain .
aap hi ko daad dete hai.
kya kare aajkal itne jo welle hain.  Both Thumbs Up Both Thumbs Up laughing8 laughing8 laughing8 laughing8

aajkal kahaan koi murgaa baang deta hai.
de bhi de to kahaan koi uski baang se uthataa hai.
saveraa hone ka intezaar kyun karen.
aajkal andheraa hotaa hi kahaan hai.


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neelgold
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2010, 10:47:11 PM »
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Khud pe itna na itrah Tu eh Insaan
Tume kya pata yaha Aur kitne husan vale Bethe hai

pls take it sportively

hum hi se seekhte ho hum hi par likhte ho hum hi se daad bhi chahte ho
mere dost kya kahen aakhir dost ho par kyun nahi kuch alag likhna bhi shuru karte ho

dekho murge ke baagh dene se savera ho hi jata hai
savera hone se pehle hi kyun kukdoo ku shuru karte ho

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2010, 10:51:24 PM »
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pls take it sportively

hum hi se seekhte ho hum hi par likhte ho hum hi se daad bhi chahte ho
mere dost kya kahen aakhir dost ho par kyun nahi kuch alag likhna bhi shuru karte ho

dekho murge ke baagh dene se savera ho hi jata hai
savera hone se pehle hi kyun kukdoo ku shuru karte ho

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Wah Kaash Ji
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Guru se sheekh chela badhe aage
Guru kabhi na chupaye mantr apne
Guru bane gu.dh chela bane sakkar
Is khel ko dekh sab khaye chakkar
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2010, 10:52:36 PM »
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theek kahaa kaashji

aap hi se seekhte hain .
aap hi ko daad dete hai.
kya kare aajkal itne jo welle hain.  Both Thumbs Up Both Thumbs Up laughing8 laughing8 laughing8 laughing8

aajkal kahaan koi murgaa baang deta hai.
de bhi de to kahaan koi uski baang se uthataa hai.
saveraa hone ka intezaar kyun karen.
aajkal andheraa hotaa hi kahaan hai.



Wonderful response Suresh Ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2010, 10:53:13 PM »
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Khud pe itna na itrah Tu eh Insaan
Tume kya pata yaha Aur kitne husan vale Bethe hai


Good response Neel Ji
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neelgold
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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2010, 10:57:49 PM »
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Dena hi padega .... Kya karian ....
MAzboori hai

ur reply is also vry gud ...
B supportive RAjesh ji
GUD ONE

Good response Neel Ji
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2010, 11:29:06 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne @kaash ji.... bahut achcha laga aapka ye post humein.... lajawaab ...aapka mazaak humein bahut pasand aaya ... ek nazar hamare mazaak pe bhi dal lijiye... please don't mind... it's only for fun...

kya kahen janaab aapne bhi humein khoob likhna sikhaaya hai,
likhne ki koshish karte hain par kahaan koi aap sa likh paaya hai,
apni to aadat hai ek hi patri par roz baar baar chalne ki,
jaane kahaan se aapse sikh k bhi humme ye problem aaya hai,

par sach ye bhi nahi hai ki hum kehte hai aapse daad dene ko,
aap hi ho jo hamare likhe pe daad deke khud k liye daad chahte ho,
hum to is shauk se likh lete hain ki sukoon mil sake is dil ko,
par najaane q aap apne liye daad dhundne hamara dwaar khatkhatate ho...


pls take it sportively

hum hi se seekhte ho hum hi par likhte ho hum hi se daad bhi chahte ho
mere dost kya kahen aakhir dost ho par kyun nahi kuch alag likhna bhi shuru karte ho

dekho murge ke baagh dene se savera ho hi jata hai
savera hone se pehle hi kyun kukdoo ku shuru karte ho

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #12 on: April 30, 2010, 11:33:53 PM »
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Kapil ji Gud One!!!!!!!!

Very Very Gud Reply .....

Yh evry1 writes here jst for her/himself nt 4 any1 appreciation

V agreed hume likhna nahi aata muze to saach main nahi aata bus youn hi kabhi dil ki feelings yaha likh dete hai THT"S it ...

GUD ONE!!!!!!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob likha hai aapne @kaash ji.... bahut achcha laga aapka ye post humein.... lajawaab ...aapka mazaak humein bahut pasand aaya ... ek nazar hamare mazaak pe bhi dal lijiye... please don't mind... it's only for fun...

kya kahen janaab aapne ne bhi humein khoob likhna sikhaaya hai,
likhne ki koshish karte hain par kahaan koi aap sa likh paaya hai,
apni to aadat hai ek hi patri par roz baar baar chalne ki,
jaane kahaan se aapse sikh k bhi humme ye problem aaya hai,

par sach ye bhi nahi hai ki hum kehte hai aapse daad dene ko,
aap hi ho jo hamare likhe pe daad deke khud k liye daad chahte ho,
hum to is shauk se likh lete hain ki sukoon mil sake is dil ko,
par najaane q aap apne liye daad dhundne hamara dwaar khatkhatate ho...


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«Reply #13 on: April 30, 2010, 11:41:21 PM »
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Thanx a lot Neel ji...!!!

aur aap sab ne bahut khoob likha hai Neel ji, Suresh ji, Rajesh ji... bahut khoob likha hai aap sab ne...!!!

Kapil ji Gud One!!!!!!!!

Very Very Gud Reply .....

Yh evry1 writes here jst for her/himself nt 4 any1 appreciation

V agreed hume likhna nahi aata muze to saach main nahi aata bus youn hi kabhi dil ki feelings yaha likh dete hai THT"S it ...

GUD ONE!!!!!!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #14 on: May 01, 2010, 02:12:06 AM »
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 Giggle :giggle:Wah wah bahut khoob Kaash ji,Suresh ji,Neel ji,Rajesh ji,Kapil ji.aap sabne kamaal ke likha.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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