---mere ashkon se---

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aaj fir behla le tu dil apna
      --mere ashkon se--
aaj fir nikhaar le zara apne phool se chehre ko
     --mere ashkon se--
aaj fir dho le tu apne labon ki khamoshi ko
     --mere ashkon se--
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2010, 07:52:38 AM »
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Bahut khoob Subash ji,heart touching creation.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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sukriya Madhuwesh ji--
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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2010, 08:54:48 AM »
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kb ji aap achha likh lete he beshak..par yahan kuchh bhatkaav sa malum hota hai..

khair eisa sirf mujhe lagta hai..

daad aapke liye~
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2010, 09:35:06 AM »
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sukriya aapka Abhi ji---
aapne sahi kaha yaha bhatkaav sa hai hi.
wo asal me mai kabhi pura likhta hi nhi.
Apka aabhari hu jo aapne dhyan dia ...
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2010, 06:42:07 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on December 10, 2010, 07:29:52 AM
aaj fir behla le tu dil apna
      --mere ashkon se--
aaj fir nikhaar le zara apne phool se chehre ko
     --mere ashkon se--
aaj fir dho le tu apne labon ki khamoshi ko
     --mere ashkon se--
to complete

Ab to hum tanha ho gaye hain
Pata nahi ye ask rahe ya na rahen
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2010, 06:52:38 PM »
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sukriya rajesh ji---
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raajesh ji apne aansuo pr bharosa rakhiye
        ye to wo saathi hain jo bin bulaye aate hain
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«Reply #7 on: December 10, 2010, 06:57:13 PM »
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Ask sookh jaate hai gham mein doobne ke baad
Tanhayee hi saath deti hai dil tootne ke baad
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«Reply #8 on: December 10, 2010, 07:01:48 PM »
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tanhaiyon ke saath ka bhi kya kahna
jaise hon ye kisi Bidhwa ke ssrir ka gahna
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«Reply #9 on: December 10, 2010, 07:43:21 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Subash jee aur Rajesh jee..!

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«Reply #10 on: December 10, 2010, 07:57:36 PM »
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sukriya Rahim ji----
saath dete rahiye..
khus rahiye sada
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«Reply #11 on: December 10, 2010, 11:44:59 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on December 10, 2010, 07:43:21 PM
Bahaut khoob Subash jee aur Rajesh jee..!

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Shukriya Rahim Ji
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