modern ho gayeen potiyaan

by dolly on February 29, 2012, 07:23:53 PM
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subaah uthte hi
Lagayen baba ramdev ki gulatiyan...

Jeans top de naal
Adaayein high heel ki jootiyan
Bus ke chakkar chod,
Chalaayein TVS ki scootiyan..

Matak matak k chlti
Jaise carom board ki geetiyan..
Kol(paas) to guzre munda
Bajayein 100 decibels ki seetiyan

Kalaaiyon mein pehne,
hari,neeli ,peeli choodiyan
Ghur ghur kr dekhein
nabbe saal ki boodiyan

Kitchen mei jo ghus jaayein
Banayein bahrat k nakshe ki rotiyan..
DADI hai pareshaan
Meri Modern ho gayeein POTIYAN...Usual Smile
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«Reply #1 on: February 29, 2012, 07:26:41 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: February 29, 2012, 07:46:35 PM »
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laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4

Bahut Khoob.

Shukriya Ifthkarji:)
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2012, 03:54:58 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2012, 01:16:56 PM »
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Bahut khoob Likha hai Dolly ji Applause
Ye andaaj bhi khoob raha
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«Reply #5 on: March 01, 2012, 01:59:32 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai Usual Smile Keep writing !
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«Reply #6 on: March 01, 2012, 03:30:28 PM »
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boht khua dolly ji
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«Reply #7 on: March 01, 2012, 05:44:22 PM »
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Wah kya khub poem likhi hai Dolly ji. Schootiyan aur jootiyan words ka istemal to kamaal ka hai. Zaroor aapne science padhi hai lekin 100 decibal to bahot zyada likh diya.
Daad pesh hai for this funny poem.
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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2012, 05:47:12 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya sk ji
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«Reply #9 on: March 02, 2012, 06:22:43 PM »
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Wah Wah Dolly Sahab / Sahibah ,, Kya hi achi nazm likhi hai Apne Mazah hi mazah ,, Lafz Pootiya.N Parh ke Ap Watan yaad ,,Asl me  lafz Pottiya.N deccani hai ,,,Meri dad khoob kare.N


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«Reply #10 on: March 02, 2012, 06:25:04 PM »
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Bahut khoob Likha hai Dolly ji Applause
Ye andaaj bhi khoob raha

Usual Smile...dhanyavaad mkv ji...Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: March 02, 2012, 06:26:53 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai Usual Smile Keep writing !

Thank u Naysha ji..Usual Smile...ji zarur koshish krugingi...Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2012, 06:32:15 PM »
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boht khua dolly ji

Thnk you sahiilji.....Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: March 02, 2012, 06:33:50 PM »
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Hello maasi what wonderful poem naratted by u.
too funny. bhot mast lika maasi. Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: March 02, 2012, 06:36:22 PM »
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Wah kya khub poem likhi hai Dolly ji. Schootiyan aur jootiyan words ka istemal to kamaal ka hai. Zaroor aapne science padhi hai lekin 100 decibal to bahot zyada likh diya.
Daad pesh hai for this funny poem.
ji tnx riyaz ji
:)haha acha 100 dcbls zada hai...apko bada xperienc haiji:)....
Apki dhokle ki recipe ka kya hua?kuch bana b ya hlwa pak gaya:)...
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