mujhe aabad kiya jaye

by mamta bajpai on May 11, 2010, 01:23:21 AM

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mamta bajpai

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HO GAYA BAHUT,BAS! AB KUCH AUR HI KIYA JAYE
CHALO NIZAM-E-HAAL-E-DIL KO DURUST KIYA JAYE

JHARANE LAGA HAI AB TO RANJ-O-GUM KA YE PALSTAR
PHULKARIYON SE DAR-O-DEEWAR KO RANGEEN KIYA JAYE

SOOKH CHUKI THI NADI JO BAHTI THI MANN KE ANDAR
HANSI- KHUSHI KE SAILAB SE USE PURAAB KIYA JAYE

KANDEEL ME CHIRAG JALNE LAGE HAI HAR SOO
ANDHERON KE IS HUJOOM KO BARBAD KIYA JAYE

PHOOTNE LAGE HAIN KAI CHASHME JO KHO GAYE THE
KHUSHIYON KE INHI FAVVARON KO SAREAAM KIYA JAYE

DARD-O-GAM KE KHANDAHAR DHAHANE LAGE HAIN AB
MAI JEENA CHAHTI HOON MUJHE AABAD KIYA JAYE


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: mujhe aabad kiya jaye

«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2010, 01:30:42 AM »

Bahut Khoob Mamta Ji


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neelgold

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Re: mujhe aabad kiya jaye

«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2010, 01:39:22 AM »

Wahh KAmal ....

Bhut Hi khoob!!!!!!!!!


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mamta bajpai

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Re: mujhe aabad kiya jaye

«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2010, 04:50:12 AM »

THANKS RAJESHJI!!


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riyaz106

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Re: mujhe aabad kiya jaye

«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2010, 04:55:37 AM »

Bahot khoobsurat poem hai Mamta ji. Aapka likhne ka ek alag hi andaaz hai. Khas taur par Urdu ke alfaaz badi liyaqat ke saath istemaal karti hain aap. Aala soch aur takhayyul ki haamil ye takhleeq qabil-e-tareef hai.


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mamta bajpai

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Re: mujhe aabad kiya jaye

«Reply #5 on: May 11, 2010, 07:36:06 AM »

RIYAZ BHAI AAP KI JANIB SE JO DAAD KE SACHCHE OR SHAFFAQ MOTI HAMARI OR UCHALE JATE HAIN UNHEN PA KAR MAI FAKHRA MAHSOOS KARTI HOON .AAPKI SARAHNA MERE LIYE BAHUT AHMIYAT RAKHTT HAI .BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA!!!


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Re: mujhe aabad kiya jaye

«Reply #6 on: May 11, 2010, 09:55:27 AM »

khoob !


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Re: mujhe aabad kiya jaye

«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2010, 12:59:12 PM »

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mamta ji... bahut khoob...!!!


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Re: mujhe aabad kiya jaye

«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2010, 01:07:30 PM »

itni chaashni tere kalaam main aai kahaan se....
sochta hoon yehi bus sochta hoon yehi..........

umda likha aapne ne bahoot khoob ....


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mamta bajpai

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Re: mujhe aabad kiya jaye

«Reply #9 on: May 11, 2010, 01:53:52 PM »

dhanyawad Klaskarji !!


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mamta bajpai

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Re: mujhe aabad kiya jaye

«Reply #10 on: May 11, 2010, 02:02:04 PM »

THANKS NAZAR BHI!!!AAP KA DAAD DENE KAYE ANDAZ HAME KHOOB BHAYA.

SAZISH-E-WAQT-O-TAQDEER NE JEENE KA HUNAR SIKHA DIYA
AUR US PAR TAJURBE NE KARELE KO NEEM CHADA BANA DIYA


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Re: mujhe aabad kiya jaye

«Reply #11 on: May 11, 2010, 02:24:47 PM »

Wah kya baat hai MAMTA BAJPAI JI.....

BAHUT JEE LIYE GUM MAIN AB IS GUMKO DOOR FAINKA JAYE
CHALO KHUSHIYON KI AUR BADE IS DIL KO KUSH KIYA JAYE

BAHUT TAKLEEF HAI IS GULAMI KI ZANZEERON MAIN
KYUN NA KHUDKO ZANZEERON SE NIKAL KAR AAZAD KIYA JAYE

SUNA HAI MAUJ MASTIYAN BHI HOTI HAI JEEVAN MAIN
KYUN NA HAR RANG ME JEEKAR ZINDAGI APNI AABAD KIYA JAYE...


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mamta bajpai

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Re: mujhe aabad kiya jaye

«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2010, 02:32:49 PM »

CARAJI BAHUT HI ACHCHA LIKHA AAP NE .PADH KAR MUTASIR HUI.MERE KALAAM KE HAR SHER KI RANG-O-BOO KO AAP NE DIL SE MAHSOOS KIYA .AAPKI NASEEHATEN GOUR FARMANE WALI HAIN .EK BAAR PHIR SE AAP KE KALAAM KO DAAD DENA CHAHOONGI.