““NAAM BIGADOON SABKA……”” :):):):):)

by nirala on May 19, 2011, 05:19:27 PM
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bura mat maanna…
apun ka bheja hilela hai
mind bhi sarkela hai
dekh ke “yahan” ki boriyat
cirkit ka fuse udela hai…

sawdhaan!! jo bhi is post par cmnt karega uska naam ulta kar dunga… aise :

sabka naam ulaat du
esa me janaseen
ulta nirala dekho kese ban gaya “alarin”

he mera koi pench dheela
bana du “adil” ko “lida”

“sahil”ka bna du “lihas”
na karu kisi ka lihaj

……
sorry mujhe laga kisi ko bura lag sakta hai islie aur nai likha…
don mind bhai log
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2011, 09:15:04 PM »
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bura mat maanna…
apun ka bheja hilela hai
mind bhi sarkela hai
dekh ke “yahan” ki boriyat
cirkit ka fuse udela hai…

sawdhaan!! jo bhi is post par cmnt karega uska naam ulta kar dunga… aise :

sabka naam ulaat du
esa me janaseen
ulta nirala dekho kese ban gaya “alarin”

he mera koi pench dheela
bana du “adil” ko “lida”

“sahil”ka bna du “lihas”
na karu kisi ka lihaj

……
sorry mujhe laga kisi ko bura lag sakta hai islie aur nai likha…
don mind bhai log

Waah alarin ji badi intresting kavita shuru ki hai...Giggle
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2011, 09:48:20 AM »
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ey atlu enhkil ak zadna aahhca agal.

-dadmi
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nirala
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2011, 09:52:46 AM »
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ey atlu enhkil ak zadna aahhca agal.

-dadmi
qnaht…dadmi……
Usual SmileUsual SmileWinkingWinking
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2011, 07:24:07 PM »
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thnx geet:
meri ichha thi ki isko aage barhau lekin…
kisi ko bura lagana acha nai lagta aajkal…
Waah alarin ji badi intresting kavita shuru ki hai...Giggle
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«Reply #5 on: May 22, 2011, 08:30:18 AM »
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bura mat maanna…
apun ka bheja hilela hai
mind bhi sarkela hai
dekh ke “yahan” ki boriyat
cirkit ka fuse udela hai…

sawdhaan!! jo bhi is post par cmnt karega uska naam ulta kar dunga… aise :

sabka naam ulaat du
esa me janaseen
ulta nirala dekho kese ban gaya “alarin”

he mera koi pench dheela
bana du “adil” ko “lida”

“sahil”ka bna du “lihas”
na karu kisi ka lihaj

……
sorry mujhe laga kisi ko bura lag sakta hai islie aur nai likha…
don mind bhai log


aaj kal muh se nahin khaate ho kya alarin Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!
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«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2011, 08:39:38 AM »
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aaj kal muh se nahin khaate ho kya alarin Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!
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«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2011, 09:02:58 AM »
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bahut khoob Rin ala ji
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«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2011, 09:13:58 AM »
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nice try nirala ji....
Lage rahiye...
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«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2011, 09:14:42 AM »
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yaar naraaz kai-ku hota hai waise hi pooch liya. aur naye naye experiment karo. kuch mera bhi gyaaaan badhe Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2011, 05:49:58 PM »
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hserus ij……
ayirkus Usual SmileUsual Smile
bahut khoob Rin ala ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2011, 05:52:39 PM »
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nice try nirala ji....
Lage rahiye...
thanx m a n z i l ji…
mai gals ka naam nai bigadta Usual SmileWinkingUsual Smile
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