padoson(CSET)

by MANOJ6568 on November 09, 2012, 06:04:44 PM
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«Reply #1 on: November 09, 2012, 06:42:59 PM »
good one manoj ji...
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«Reply #2 on: November 09, 2012, 06:44:07 PM »
Quote from: nishi gahlaut on November 09, 2012, 06:42:59 PM
good one manoj ji...
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«Reply #3 on: November 10, 2012, 01:20:35 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: November 10, 2012, 03:20:51 AM »
Quote from: nandbahu on November 10, 2012, 01:20:35 AM
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«Reply #5 on: November 10, 2012, 06:12:42 AM »
Dear Manoj,
Iss kavita mein itni khaamiya hain ki ye ek kavita na lag-ke ek hadd darje ka ghatiya mazaak lag raha hai.

jaise ki.. padosan aur samdhan do alag cheeze hoti hain,
Dusra, apka talaffuz bhi ghalata hai
teesra.. office or OFF .. , aap yahan koi discussion nahi kar rahe, shayari main ek adaa hoti hai, naa ki kuch bhi daal diya jaaye shayari ke naam par,

Phir uske baad aapne CHITA ka proyog kiya hai, jo ki Chinta hona chahiye, uske ooper aapne fir zabardasti Pyaar ko sex samjhaya hai .

Zahir hai aap poetry ko mazaak samajhte hai, poetry ke peeche jo ek anterman sae nikalne wali kashish hai, aap abhi tak nahi samjhe..

Mazahiya shayari ke naam pe aap kuch be ghalat-salat nahi post kar sakte, aapne toh shayad likhne ke baad sahi se pada bhi nahi ki aapne kya likha hai..

Maaf kariyega lekin aap ke ander ka poet abhi bhi soya hua hai..
Mujhe umeed hai ki kayi logo ko ye laga hoga.. lekin kisi ne bola nahi shistachaar ke karan..

Umeed hai aap shayari aur ghatiya shayari mein farak samjhte hain..
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«Reply #6 on: November 10, 2012, 06:16:53 AM »
Quote from: CIC on November 10, 2012, 06:12:42 AM
Dear Manoj,
Iss kavita mein itni khaamiya hain ki ye ek kavita na lag-ke ek hadd darje ka ghatiya mazaak lag raha hai.

jaise ki.. padosan aur samdhan do alag cheeze hoti hain,
Dusra, apka talaffuz bhi ghalata hai
teesra.. office or OFF .. , aap yahan koi discussion nahi kar rahe, shayari main ek adaa hoti hai, naa ki kuch bhi daal diya jaaye shayari ke naam par,

Phir uske baad aapne CHITA ka proyog kiya hai, jo ki Chinta hona chahiye, uske ooper aapne fir zabardasti Pyaar ko sex samjhaya hai .

Zahir hai aap poetry ko mazaak samajhte hai, poetry ke peeche jo ek anterman sae nikalne wali kashish hai, aap abhi tak nahi samjhe..

Mazahiya shayari ke naam pe aap kuch be ghalat-salat nahi post kar sakte, aapne toh shayad likhne ke baad sahi se pada bhi nahi ki aapne kya likha hai..

Maaf kariyega lekin aap ke ander ka poet abhi bhi soya hua hai..
Mujhe umeed hai ki kayi logo ko ye laga hoga.. lekin kisi ne bola nahi shistachaar ke karan..

Umeed hai aap shayari aur ghatiya shayari mein farak samjhte hain..


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«Reply #7 on: November 10, 2012, 06:22:00 AM »
Shukriya saath dene ki liye qalb saheb..

Aur mera irada bas inke andar ke poet ko bahar nikalna hai, jab tak koi inhe batayega nahi toh kaise he janene
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«Reply #8 on: November 10, 2012, 06:28:58 AM »
Quote from: CIC on November 10, 2012, 06:22:00 AM
Shukriya saath dene ki liye qalb saheb..

Aur mera irada bas inke andar ke poet ko bahar nikalna hai, jab tak koi inhe batayega nahi toh kaise he janene

as per his profile he is a 40 years old man and kidding like a 10 years old boy.

 just a rediculous.
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«Reply #9 on: November 10, 2012, 07:20:32 AM »
Par internet ka matlab hi yahi hai, freedom of expression.. but he should maintain some dignity too.
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riyaz106
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«Reply #10 on: November 10, 2012, 07:26:49 AM »
I agree with CIC.  Male and female members of all age group visit this forum and such type of things should not be posted. Mr. Manoj should delete his post.
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