pareshani-diwaani..mb

by marhoom bahayaat on April 11, 2010, 12:33:33 PM
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                          kharchaa itnaa badhaa ki pareshani bann gayi.!
                          karzaa itnaa chadhaa ki pareshani bann gayi..!

                          sunayaa thaa ek haqeeqat zamaaney ko kabhi,
                          aaj wo shahar main ek kahaani bann gayi...!
                          
                          guzaar diyaa waqt hum ney jiskey intezaar main,
                           sunaa hai aaj wo bachchon ki naani bann gayi...!
                          
                          diyaa thaa silney jo shauq sey kai saal pahley,
                          shukr hai aaj wo sherwani bann gayi..!

                          bahut koshish key baad bhi khaana hotaa hai kharab,
                          kamaal hai janaab sey aaj wo biryaani bann gayi..!

                          kitney naamwar aaye mehfil main naa huaa kuch asar,
                          terey ek ghazal ki marhoom wo diwaani bann gayi....!!!!

                          
                          
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2010, 12:47:24 PM »
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Bahoth qoob Marhoom sahab , Kya kahene Bade din baad khuch Mazahiya Padne ko Mila .. 2nd ashar kaafi sanjeeda hai , Bahoth qoob , Dad qubool karen ..


Khadim ..

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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2010, 02:23:19 PM »
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Gud One ... ENjoyed!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2010, 02:27:39 PM »
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bahut achhi kavita hai Marhoom ji. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2010, 02:27:47 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai        Marhoom Bahayaat ji.....


kharchaa itna bada ki daru peene band hogayi
karzaa itna chadhaa ki udari milni band hogayi

uda di thi doulat jiski chah main poori
suna hai wo kisi aurki dewaani bangayi

uske gum main sirf daru ka hi toh sahara tha
ab uske na milne pe pareshaani bad gayi

us din mehfil mein humne apne gum-e-dastan ki ghazal kya suna di
woh mere is ghazal ki dewaani ban gayi......




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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2010, 02:33:42 PM »
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wah cara ji wah kahaan the itne dino tak.
humne aapko bahut yaad kiya.
aapki itni mazedaar reply mujhe tahe dil se pasand hai.

kharcha kahaan se badhataa aamdani hi band ho gai.
karza itnaa badha ki sir ki chhat aasman ho gai.


Wah kya baat hai        Marhoom Bahayaat ji.....


kharchaa itna bada ki daru peene band hogayi
karzaa itna chadhaa ki udari milni band hogayi

uda di thi doulat jiski chah main poori
suna hai wo kisi aurki dewaani bangayi

uske gum main sirf daru ka hi toh sahara tha
ab uske na milne pe pareshaani bad gayi

us din mehfil mein humne apne gum-e-dastan ki ghazal kya suna di
woh mere is ghazal ki dewaani ban gayi......





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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2010, 08:33:14 PM »
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Wah Cara Ji ,,,

Gud one Jo Daru band gaye ..aur Udari b
KOi tenison nhi fir ..hai na !!!

Wah kya baat hai        Marhoom Bahayaat ji.....


kharchaa itna bada ki daru peene band hogayi
karzaa itna chadhaa ki udari milni band hogayi

uda di thi doulat jiski chah main poori
suna hai wo kisi aurki dewaani bangayi

uske gum main sirf daru ka hi toh sahara tha
ab uske na milne pe pareshaani bad gayi

us din mehfil mein humne apne gum-e-dastan ki ghazal kya suna di
woh mere is ghazal ki dewaani ban gayi......





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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2010, 09:44:25 PM »
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Wah bahut bahut khoob Marhoom ji,Cara ji,Suresh ji.marvelous creation.keep writting. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 11, 2010, 11:20:51 PM »
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wahhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhh khoob likha hai janab..mazahiya kalaam with one sanjeeda shair.........ha ha ha
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«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2010, 06:58:02 AM »
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Bahot khoob MB ji. Ye mazahiya rang bhi khoob raha.
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«Reply #10 on: April 12, 2010, 07:47:33 AM »
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                          kharchaa itnaa badhaa ki pareshani bann gayi.!
                          karzaa itnaa chadhaa ki pareshani bann gayi..!

                          sunayaa thaa ek haqeeqat zamaaney ko kabhi,
                          aaj wo shahar main ek kahaani bann gayi...!
                         
                          guzaar diyaa waqt hum ney jiskey intezaar main,
                           sunaa hai aaj wo bachchon ki naani bann gayi...!
                         
                          diyaa thaa silney jo shauq sey kai saal pahley,
                          shukr hai aaj wo sherwani bann gayi..!

                          bahut koshish key baad bhi khaana hotaa hai kharab,
                          kamaal hai janaab sey aaj wo biryaani bann gayi..!

                          kitney naamwar aaye mehfil main naa huaa kuch asar,
                          terey ek ghazal ki marhoom wo diwaani bann gayi....!!!!

                         
                         

Good One MB Ji
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«Reply #11 on: April 13, 2010, 12:52:16 PM »
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Bahoth qoob Marhoom sahab , Kya kahene Bade din baad khuch Mazahiya Padne ko Mila .. 2nd ashar kaafi sanjeeda hai , Bahoth qoob , Dad qubool karen ..


Khadim ..

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thank you qadeer bhai
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«Reply #12 on: April 13, 2010, 12:52:55 PM »
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Gud One ... ENjoyed!!!!!!!

thanx neel gold
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«Reply #13 on: April 14, 2010, 01:37:01 PM »
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bahut ache marhoom
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«Reply #14 on: April 15, 2010, 10:13:47 AM »
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bahut ache marhoom

thanx samnoj ji
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