Patang meri kat ke mujhe ek sandesha mano koi de gayee

by prashad on January 17, 2013, 09:31:54 AM
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Humne jab makar ke din chhat par patang urayee
Anjane hi paros ki chhat pe haseena se najar takrayee

Vo kamsin bala bhi patang ura machal rahi thhi
Mujh bechare pe bijli mano giraye ja rahi thhi

Kabhi patang ko dheel deti toh kabhi dor kheenchti
Kabhi kissi ki patang kat ti to khushi se jhoom jati

Duniya se bekhabar aanchal hava mein lehra raha thha
Julphe mathe pe aise chha rahi thhi mano ban ke ghata

Aasman ko takti aur phir jor se ye kata chhillati
Suraj ke prakash mein galo ki lalima aur badh jati

Kabhi hasti aur kabhi gunguna ke khamosh si ho jati
Patang na kat jaye usski achanak dar ke simat si jati

Hum bhi patang ura rahe thhe aur kankhiyo se ussko takte
Aur phir achanak muskura ke patang urrane mein mast ho jate

Achanak usski patang ki dor meri patang se lipat gayee
Lekin ye kya meri patang bhi usski jaise deewani ho gayee

Lakh chahne par bhi meri patang usski dor se alag na hoti thhi
Lagta thha mano patang bhi usske sath ke ehsas se romanchit thhi

Tabhi meri patang usski dor se lipat mujh se alag ho gayee
Patang meri kat ke mujhe ek sandesha mano koi de gayee

Usski khushi chehre se usske iss terah jhalakti thhi yaro
Patang urrane ka anand hi kuchh aur thha aaj ke din yaro

Humari patang kat gayee phir bhi ab mayus na thhe hum
Harne ke baad bhi jeete huye se lag rahe thhe yaro hum  



   
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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2013, 09:33:08 AM »
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Humne jab makar ke din chhat par patang urayee
Anjane hi paros ki chhat pe haseena se najar takrayee

Vo kamsin bala bhi patang ura machal rahi thhi
Mujh bechare pe bijli mano giraye ja rahi thhi

Kabhi patang ko dheel deti toh kabhi dor kheenchti
Kabhi kissi ki patang kat ti to khushi se jhoom jati

Duniya se bekhabar aanchal hava mein lehra raha thha
Julphe mathe pe aise chha rahi thhi mano ban ke ghata

Aasman ko takti aur phir jor se ye kata chhillati
Suraj ke prakash mein galo ki lalima aur badh jati

Kabhi hasti aur kabhi gunguna ke khamosh si ho jati
Patang na kat jaye usski achanak dar ke simat si jati

Hum bhi patang ura rahe thhe aur kankhiyo se ussko takte
Aur phir achanak muskura ke patang urrane mein mast ho jate

Achanak usski patang ki dor meri patang se lipat gayee
Lekin ye kya meri patang bhi usski jaise deewani ho gayee

Lakh chahne par bhi meri patang usski dor se alag na hoti thhi
Lagta thha mano patang bhi usske sath ke ehsas se romanchit thhi

Tabhi meri patang usski dor se lipat mujh se alag ho gayee
Patang meri kat ke mujhe ek sandesha mano koi de gayee

Usski khushi chehre se usske iss terah jhalakti thhi yaro
Patang urrane ka anand hi kuchh aur thha aaj ke din yaro

Humari patang kat gayee phir bhi ab mayus na thhe hum
Harne ke baad bhi jeete huye se lag rahe thhe yaro hum  



   
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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2013, 09:54:35 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob patang udaai
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2013, 11:00:30 AM »
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haha very nice prasadji
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2013, 02:55:34 AM »
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haha very nice prasadji
thanx azad ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2013, 03:09:54 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob patang udaai
thanx saini ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2013, 03:54:45 AM »
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WAH WAH WAH PRASHAD JI BOHUT KHUB PATANG URHAA RAHE THEY YAAN HASEENA SE PECH LARHA RAHE THEY
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2013, 07:05:32 AM »
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WAH WAH WAH PRASHAD JI BOHUT KHUB PATANG URHAA RAHE THEY YAAN HASEENA SE PECH LARHA RAHE THEY
thanx saahill ji, ek panth do kaj kar rahe thhe
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«Reply #8 on: January 19, 2013, 01:50:40 AM »
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wah wah, kya patang urayee aapne
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«Reply #9 on: January 21, 2013, 05:11:57 AM »
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wah wah, kya patang urayee aapne
thanx nandbahu ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 21, 2013, 06:33:08 AM »
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bahut khoob udaya patang aapne. bahut bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: January 25, 2013, 03:58:29 AM »
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Bahut  khoob  prashad ji ,  bahut    khoob  likha  hai  apne ,  dheron    daad ....
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«Reply #12 on: January 25, 2013, 12:28:09 PM »
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bahut khoob udaya patang aapne. bahut bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thanx suman ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 25, 2013, 12:28:31 PM »
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Bahut  khoob  prashad ji ,  bahut    khoob  likha  hai  apne ,  dheron    daad ....
thanx tuhina ji
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