Posting Shayari ki Funny Shayari......Abul Asad

by Abul Asad on February 29, 2012, 07:44:10 AM
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Men kabhi kabhi dekhta hoon ke log kahani ke paragraph ki tarha apni shayari post kiye dete hain  aur phir pareshan hote hain ke unhe dad kissi ne na di. Koi comment kiyon nahi kiya?
To un nazreen ke liye ye choti si shayari pesh hai.. ab aap baqi sab to samajdar hi hain, aaplog isse nahin padhen to behtar hai, dekhiye bhi nahn isse, aur comments to bilkul hi na den. Doosron ko to batana sakht mana hai, shayed aapko fine bhi hojaye uska! Khair aik aad bar padhliya to maaf kardenge, magar dobara mat padhiye ga....please kuch to karam kariyega, apne par nahin mujh par.


 
Posting Karne ki Salahiyaten

 Pehle format apna sahi karlo, to aasani hogi padhne
 aur maze ham sab ko aapki shayari ke honge padhte
 
kuch iss tarha ke ashaar alag alag hon
 unke misre aapas men mile hove hon
 
Phir saaron ke koi maine bhi to hon
 Kiya bat ho ke, jazbat men gar dobe hove hon?
 
Kuch lehaaz dosron ka bhi karte hon
 Takleef kissi ko na dete, dil kissi ka na dukhate hon
 
Maze to tab hain ke kalaam aapkae apne original hon
 doosron ke gar ho, to unke nam bhi neeche darz hon
 

Yanhaan par lake post kijeye mehfil men raunaq badhaiye
 Aur yanhan sab ke daad saath liye, apna bhi man behlaiye
 Khadim aapka - Abul Asad
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«Reply #1 on: February 29, 2012, 08:22:55 AM »
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Men kabhi kabhi dekhta hoon ke log kahani ke paragraph ki tarha apni shayari post kiye dete hain  aur phir pareshan hote hain ke unhe dad kissi ne na di. Koi comment kiyon nahi kiya?
To un nazreen ke liye ye choti si shayari pesh hai.. ab aap baqi sab to samajdar hi hain, aaplog isse nahin padhen to behtar hai, dekhiye bhi nahn isse, aur comments to bilkul hi na den. Doosron ko to batana sakht mana hai, shayed aapko fine bhi hojaye uska! Khair aik aad bar padhliya to maaf kardenge, magar dobara mat padhiye ga....please kuch to karam kariyega, apne par nahin mujh par.


 
Posting Karne ki Salahiyaten

 Pehle format apna sahi karlo, to aasani hogi padhne
 aur maze ham sab ko aapki shayari ke honge padhte
 
kuch iss tarha ke ashaar alag alag hon
 unke misre aapas men mile hove hon
 
Phir saaron ke koi maine bhi to hon
 Kiya bat ho ke, jazbat men gar dobe hove hon?
 
Kuch lehaaz dosron ka bhi karte hon
 Takleef kissi ko na dete, dil kissi ka na dukhate hon
 
Maze to tab hain ke kalaam aapkae apne original hon
 doosron ke gar ho, to unke nam bhi neeche darz hon
 

Yanhaan par lake post kijeye mehfil men raunaq badhaiye
 Aur yanhan sab ke daad saath liye, apna bhi man behlaiye
 Khadim aapka - Abul Asad



achchi hidayat hai
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«Reply #2 on: February 29, 2012, 08:27:46 AM »
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Sir ji

Aapke liye nahin thi...voh to unlogon ke liye thien.....(smiling).. not to be take too seriously

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«Reply #3 on: February 29, 2012, 10:35:39 AM »
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good suggestion
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«Reply #4 on: February 29, 2012, 05:51:03 PM »
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tips ache hain ji--
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lage rahie
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«Reply #5 on: February 29, 2012, 07:15:33 PM »
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tips ache hain ji--
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Sarfira ji,

Kanhaan ye mehfil mukammil jab tak na aye aap usme
Ye dil bhi na maaane baat kahe ayenge zarur ap usme

Younhi thodi tanz o mazhayi ho mahfil usme
Kuch mujh jaise log rahe na taghafil usme

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«Reply #6 on: February 29, 2012, 07:16:31 PM »
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good suggestion

Dr saheb not to be taken too seriously
this was done in a light vein

Thank you soo much for every one of your comments
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«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2015, 12:04:05 PM »
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Hello uncleji.....shikha here
Kaise ho aap?
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«Reply #8 on: August 01, 2015, 06:44:07 AM »
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Sarfira ji,

Kanhaan ye mehfil mukammil jab tak na aye aap usme
Ye dil bhi na maaane baat kahe ayenge zarur ap usme

Younhi thodi tanz o mazhayi ho mahfil usme
Kuch mujh jaise log rahe na taghafil usme

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