...~~saas bhi rukney lagi~~...

by HumTum on June 03, 2005, 04:58:24 PM
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Saghir Siddiqui ki aik khoobsurat ghazal or uska falooda haazir hay. Aap mein se kuchh log tou ise pahle hi parh chuke hoNge.

pahle saghir ki ghazal or phir meri parody


Original Ghazal by Saaghir Sadiqqi

Ismein shaamil dasht-o-sahra or weeranay ki baat
Ahl-e-mehfil say juda hay tere dewanay ki baat
Mohtasib! hum bay gunahoN ko na day ilzaam-e-maY
Tashnagi mein aa gaie, honTon pay maY khanay ki baat

HaaN abhi bhooli nahi jor-e-khizaaN ki daastaaN
Ahtayatan hum nahi kertay bahaar aanay ki baat

Ban gaie hay surkhi-e-husn-e-baharan jaadwaaN
Aa gaie zulf-e-moanber kay bikher janay ki baat

Her nafas mein sholah zan haiN, germiaN halaat ki
Zindagi hay in dinoN bay mout mer janay ki baat

Maykadah badla huva, SAGHAR shakastah haal hain
Her haqeeqat ban gaie hay aaj afsanay ki baat.



Parody by Me

Jis meiN shaamil saalay, saali, saas ke aanay ki baat
Us say baRh kar aur kya ho dil ke ghabranay ki baat
Muntazim, ham faaqa mastoN ko nadeeda mat samajh
Bhook mein honTon pay aa hi jati hay khanay ki baat

Kucha-e-janaN mein jab say "sir phuTaw'wal" ho gaie
Ahtayatan ab nahi kertay wahan janay ki baat

uR gaie chahray ki rangat, saans bhi ruknay lagi
chheR di begum nay phir shopping pay lay janay ki baat

Ban gaya apna raqeeb, "Achhu Qasaaie" Uff naseeb!
Panga lena us say hay, bay mout mer janay ki baat

Apni woh zindah dili, hazir jawabi or hansi
Bad az shaadi bani hay aaj afsanay ki baat

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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2005, 12:25:55 PM »
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ye to main ne pahle post ker chuka hu
lekin ek baar phir ise dekh ke acha lga mujhe
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2005, 12:01:38 PM »
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suna hai panchi pinjrey se aazaad hai
suna hai panchi pinjrey se aazaad hai

tu bhi copy paste karney mein ustaad hai  :lol:
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