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ek khyal aya ek din yun hi baato baato me
umra ho gai hai shadee kar lu
kyn beza tadpu tanha raato me!!
bas ye soch dil ka por por khil gaya
yun kahiye andar se mai buri tarah hil gaya!!
nikal pade gharwalo ko le saath apne
machal rha dil tha or dekh rha tha kisi ke mast mst sapne!!
ladki ke ghar pahuche hazaaron khab lekar
dil ke saare armaan lekar
haathon me uphaar ka samaan lekar!!
chai pani ka daur khatm hua
mene ladki dekhte soch liya
bas yahi ab mera jeevansaathi hua!!
socha clearcut baat ho jaye...cn
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«Reply #1 on: November 28, 2010, 05:55:23 AM » |
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jaldi aage ki story sunai jaye.......
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«Reply #2 on: November 28, 2010, 06:02:39 AM » |
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 aapko btaya tha na.. one time likhta hun.. space hi khatam tha cell pr ab wo mood nhi.. wo soch nhi.. wo khayalaat nhi.. kisi din jarur issme hi add karunga wo Shaddy story apni shadee ka:) |
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«Reply #3 on: November 28, 2010, 06:12:18 AM » |
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uffffffff KB
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«Reply #4 on: November 28, 2010, 06:25:01 AM » |
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haye aapki ye Ufff se yaad aai aage ki story mere dard bhare shadee ki dastaan:-
to suniye ----
maine socha chalo sab clearcut usse baat kar lu
kya hai uske khayalaat malum kar lu!
ladki se kuch akele me guftagu karne ki izazat mangi
uske gharwalo ne kuch ankhen tani
fir badi muskil se bhari hami!
ladki thi khubsurat bala ki
me samjh na paya uski chalaki!
jaisa sb jante hai ki hum kale hai
kaale hain par gazab ke dilwale hain
par duniya ko or khas kr ladki ko dil kahan dikta hai
yaha to chehra hi bikta hai
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«Reply #5 on: November 28, 2010, 06:31:52 AM » |
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wahhhhhhh jiiiiiiiii kya baat kahi haiiiii
splyy last two lines mast mast hain
badi achchi hai apki story...
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«Reply #6 on: November 28, 2010, 06:39:13 AM » |
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Aage kahiye kya hua aap ke saath
Kahin tu sach mein nahin kar diya kill
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«Reply #7 on: November 28, 2010, 06:44:35 AM » |
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thanx ab aage suno--
ladki ne jis tarah ki nazro se dekha
pta nhi usne mujhme dekha to kya dekha!
qatil si muskurat usne sajai apne laal laal hoto par
samsamahat si hone lagi mere umango tarango par!
muskurakr usne kha kya lene aye ho
zara dekh lo ek baar aaina!
uff kya ghabrahat hui hume or ho gaye paseena paseena!
humne kaha yar pasand nhi tujhe mai gar
dil bada kr or meri iss galti ko chama kar!
bas muh latkaye
dil dukhaye
hum chale aye!
na ai kbi shadee ki soch dubara
hum aaj b rah gaye h no.1 kuwara!
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«Reply #9 on: November 28, 2010, 06:48:44 AM » |
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ufffffffffff.....ye end achcha nahin laga humko.....
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«Reply #10 on: November 28, 2010, 06:52:59 AM » |
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Ab kya iraadaa hai
Mere khayal hai ki ab chhor do chinta
Nahin to jal jaayegi kahin par chita
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«Reply #11 on: November 28, 2010, 06:56:47 AM » |
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haan ab to irada hai ki... sanyasi ban jau  Kasak--har pyar ka anth aise hi hota hai hehehe...humara dil aaj b jawaan h:p |
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«Reply #12 on: November 28, 2010, 06:59:37 AM » |
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To kar na chinta anyaas
Le le jhat tu sanyaas
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«Reply #13 on: November 28, 2010, 07:05:37 AM » |
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kuwara no.1 ko bana rahe ho
sanyasi no.1...
sanyasiyon ki mauj hai aai
har taraf unki fauj hai chai
kabhi ichhadhari baba to
kabhi dayanand ki baari aai!!
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«Reply #14 on: November 28, 2010, 01:43:25 PM » |
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Nahi kb ji....aapko sanyaasi ban ne ki koi zarurat nahi hai....kuwara no. 1 hi dulha no. 1 banta hai....kahani acchi hai.... |
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