SUBHA PEETA HOON SHAAM PEETA HOON .........HASAN -Panna 2:Mazahiya Shayri(Funny Shayari)

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«Reply #15 on: October 09, 2011, 12:54:58 PM »

Gyan Prakash ji,Hausla afzai ke liye bahut shukriya.HASAN


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Re: SUBHA PEETA HOON SHAAM PEETA HOON .........HASAN

«Reply #16 on: October 09, 2011, 02:16:16 PM »

WAAH WAAH BAHUT KHOOB..


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«Reply #17 on: October 09, 2011, 04:32:03 PM »

Sanjeevkash ji,Aapo ne ghazal pasand ki.Bahut mashkoor hoon aap ka.


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«Reply #18 on: October 10, 2011, 03:50:56 AM »

Suresh sangwan ji,Hausla afzai ke lkiye tahedil se shukriya.


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Re: SUBHA PEETA HOON SHAAM PEETA HOON .........HASAN

«Reply #19 on: October 10, 2011, 04:46:36 AM »

ham to mar mite aap ki gazal pe. Applause

jab ziyaada ho kaam peeta hooN.
jab ho n koi kaam peeta hooN.
muaafi aur apni naasamjhee ke saath kahne ki koshish kar raha hoon. pata nahin ek sher men quafiye ko repeat karna acceptable hai ya nahin.aap mere pasandeeda aur mehboob shayar hain.isi liye aapki shaan men gustakhi kar baitha.vaise main khud is sher ko ese samajh raha hooan.

jab ziyaada ho kaam peeta hooN.
jab hotaa hooN naakaam peetaa hooN.


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«Reply #20 on: October 10, 2011, 09:10:03 AM »

adil bechain saheb,bahut bahut shukriya.Mazahiya ghazal ko aap ne kya khoobsurat naam de diya - Rind nama.Bahut khoob!


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«Reply #21 on: October 10, 2011, 10:26:42 AM »

Hausla afzai ke liye bahut shukriya,Khwaish ji.Aap ne bhi eik bahut khoobsurat sheir ka izaafa kar diya.Bekhudi waala sheir hai.Bahut shukriya.HASAN


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«Reply #22 on: October 10, 2011, 11:50:09 AM »

theyash ji,Aap ko ghazal pasand aayee,hausla afzai kee.Bahut mamnoon hoon aapka.HASAN


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«Reply #23 on: October 10, 2011, 03:46:38 PM »

Sadiq Rizvi saheb,Hausla afzai ke liye aap ka shukriya.Aap ki khoobsurat nazm 'Nurse aur Main'padh chuka hoon.Ummeed hai aap apne kalaam ke saath bazm mein shareek hote raheinge.HASAN


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«Reply #24 on: October 10, 2011, 05:59:30 PM »

Saini ji,Bahut shukriya ghazal pasand karne aur daad dene ka.Saini saheb,Main Urdu shairy ke technical pahluon ka zyada ilm nahin rakhta.Lekin,aap ke uthhaye huay sawaal ke liye literature agar mil gaya to zaroor dekhoonga aur agar aap ki tashweesh sahi nikli to aap ko ittila bhi karuunga.Filhaal,mera khayaal hai ki main ne sahi likkha hai.
Aap ne jo tarmeem ki hai wo to nahiin mumkin hai kyuunki iss mein na to baher ka khyaal rakhha gaya hai na hi 'kaam' aur 'naakaam' iss baher mein hamqaafia hain.
Aap ka shukriya ki apni tashweesh ka izhaar kiya.Iss se humko kuchh jaanne aur samajhne ka mauqa milta hai.Duago,HASAN


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«Reply #25 on: October 12, 2011, 03:54:20 AM »

siddiqi sahab,bahut achhi mazaqia shairi hai.maza aagaya.aakhir mein diye anti climax wala sher bhi khoob hai.meri daad qabool karen.


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«Reply #26 on: October 14, 2011, 06:18:26 AM »

Bahut bahut shukriya Qais saheb,aapki himmat afzai aur ghazal pasand karne ke liye.HASAN


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«Reply #27 on: October 14, 2011, 06:34:22 AM »

Vah hasan Sahab
Mai peeta nahi, kabhi piya nahi lekin bina piya mujhe nasha aa gaya. peene vaale ko to allah hi bachaye.
urdu ka na ke barabar gyan hai, lekin lucknow me rahne ki vajah se kaafi kuch samajh jaata hu. bahut bahut maja aaya. aap to har fan me maahir hai janab.
subhaan allah.. Dil se daad kubool kare.


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«Reply #28 on: October 14, 2011, 06:54:14 AM »

Wah kya baat hai F.H.SIDDIQUI JI....

Subha peeta hun sham peeta hun
mat pucho aese kyun jeeta hun
din raat apni biwi se pithta hun (maar khaata hun)
isiliye toh yeh jaam peeta hun....


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«Reply #29 on: October 14, 2011, 09:19:08 AM »

Bahut shukriya mkv ji.Aap bhi mere hamwatan hain yeh jaan kar khushi hui.Lucknow ka hone ki wajah hi se un badnaseebon ka haal samajhta hoon jo iss laanat ke liye har bahana,waqt ,jagah dhoondh lete hain.Khuda bachhaye .Haan bin piye khumaar aaane mein to koi haraj nahiin hai.Hausla afzai ke liye bahut shukriya.Aap Lucknow ke hain iss liye Lucknow ka eik dard eik sher mein aur haazir karuunga .Aap ke zauq se ummeed hai aap pahchhan lenge aur aone tabsire se nawaazeinge.Hasan


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