TAISH MEIN NAA AA MERE BAAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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                       aa   kar  taish   mein  usne  challenge  kar  diya.
                       dekhee  maut  saamne,  andaaz   change   kar  diya.

                 
                       dee  davaa  aisee  kee  main  pareshaan  ho  gayaa.
                       lemon  ke  mere  baa g ko  usne  orange  kar  diya.

 
                       baat  chhotee  see  thee  mil  kar  hull  kar  lete.
                       ghusaa kar taaang apnee khandaanee revenge kar diya.


                       rahee    pakad   uskee   mazboot  iss  shahr   mein.
                       khaane-kamaane  ka  zariyaa  mera  arrange kar diya.

 
                       rahee    chaaploosee   bhee   badee   dumdaar  apnee.
                       qalb  ne shahr apna uske gaao.N se exchange kar diya.
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«Reply #1 on: December 03, 2012, 06:55:28 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2012, 07:02:00 AM »
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                       aa   kar  taish   mein  usne  challenge  kar  diya.
                       dekhee  maut  saamne,  andaaz   change   kar  diya.

                 
                       dee  davaa  aisee  kee  main  pareshaan  ho  gayaa.
                       lemon  ke  mere  baa g ko  usne  orange  kar  diya.

 
                       baat  chhotee  see  thee  mil  kar  hull  kar  lete.
                       ghusaa kar taaang apnee khandaanee revenge kar diya.


                       rahee    pakad   uskee   mazboot  iss  shahr   mein.
                       khaane-kamaane  ka  zariyaa  mera  arrange kar diya.

 
                       rahee    chaaploosee   bhee   badee   dumdaar  apnee.
                       qalb  ne shahr apna uske gaao.N se exchange kar diya.

bohut khoob qalb jee bohut umda ghazal hai, achcha experiment kiya hai qafia ke sath. abohut khoob maqta kaha hai... dherroon daad qubool kareN.....
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2012, 07:29:24 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 03, 2012, 07:31:33 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai..Qalb jee
ye andaaz khoob bhaya..Applause Applause Applause Applause
mast likha hai aapne
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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2012, 07:45:18 AM »
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so beautifully written qalb jee bahut bahut mubarak ho apko
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2012, 09:03:26 AM »
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                       aa   kar  taish   mein  usne  challenge  kar  diya.
                       dekhee  maut  saamne,  andaaz   change   kar  diya.

                 
                       dee  davaa  aisee  kee  main  pareshaan  ho  gayaa.
                       lemon  ke  mere  baa g ko  usne  orange  kar  diya.

 
                       baat  chhotee  see  thee  mil  kar  hull  kar  lete.
                       ghusaa kar taaang apnee khandaanee revenge kar diya.


                       rahee    pakad   uskee   mazboot  iss  shahr   mein.
                       khaane-kamaane  ka  zariyaa  mera  arrange kar diya.

 
                       rahee    chaaploosee   bhee   badee   dumdaar  apnee.
                       qalb  ne shahr apna uske gaao.N se exchange kar diya.

laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
wonderful
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«Reply #7 on: December 03, 2012, 09:05:18 AM »
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qalb sahab ahchi peshkash hai hasi jarur aayi, par ye to shayad mere naam se post honi chahiye thi na... tongue3 tongue3 aakhir pehla word hi mera naam hai... hehehehehehehehe...
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«Reply #8 on: December 03, 2012, 09:47:48 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: December 03, 2012, 03:10:11 PM »
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wah bhai..badhya likha hai qalb ji
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«Reply #11 on: December 03, 2012, 04:37:05 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: December 04, 2012, 06:59:27 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: December 05, 2012, 07:14:14 AM »
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                       aa   kar  taish   mein  usne  challenge  kar  diya.
                       dekhee  maut  saamne,  andaaz   change   kar  diya.

                 
                       dee  davaa  aisee  kee  main  pareshaan  ho  gayaa.
                       lemon  ke  mere  baa g ko  usne  orange  kar  diya.

 
                       baat  chhotee  see  thee  mil  kar  hull  kar  lete.
                       ghusaa kar taaang apnee khandaanee revenge kar diya.


                       rahee    pakad   uskee   mazboot  iss  shahr   mein.
                       khaane-kamaane  ka  zariyaa  mera  arrange kar diya.

 
                       rahee    chaaploosee   bhee   badee   dumdaar  apnee.
                       qalb  ne shahr apna uske gaao.N se exchange kar diya.


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

maza aagaya Qalb jee bahut acha likha hai aapne Taish mein aake... tongue3
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