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                         karaamat  lafz.on  ki  dikhaaein kyaa...,
                         baat   se  baat   ko  badhaaein kyaa...,

                         ek hi mohabbat mein cheekh riyaa hai..,
                         tujhe maashuka ke naam ginwaaein kyaa..,

                         huaa  kharchaa bahut daaru mein apnaa..,
                         kuch  pepsi-wepsi  bhi magwaaein kyaa..,

                         kho  gaye gar duniya ki bheed mein tum..,
                         tumhein  tum  se  phir  milwaaein kyaa..,

                         hanstaa  rahaa   zamaanaa  taumr hum pe..,
                         apni bebasi pe tumhein bhi hansaaein kyaa..,

                         haraam ki daulat pe hajj qabul nahin hota..,
                         iss umr mein halaal ki rozi kamaaein kyaa..,

                         de ijaazat hamein aaj bazm-e-adab bechain..,
                         bina  bahr  ki  ek   ghazal sunaaein kyaa..,
                        

                        
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2012, 06:39:03 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Adil ji....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 25, 2012, 07:11:20 PM »
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waahhhhhhh
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«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2012, 08:56:13 AM »
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Bechain Sahab Adaab !


Waah janab waaH kia baat hai bahut khoob janab..... Usual Smile
Kia mazahiyaa Kalaam pesh ki hai aapne...  Sabhi khayaal behad khoob
rahe janab waaH bahut khoob.... Usual Smile


Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye ... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile





                         karaamat  lafz.on  ki  dikhaaein kyaa...,
                         baat   se  baat   ko  badhaaein kyaa...,

Achcha matla hai janab daad

                         ek hi mohabbat mein cheekh riyaa hai..,
                         tujhe maashuka ke naam ginwaaein kyaa..,

Ha ha ha ha ha kia kahne janab waaH bahut khoob...  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

                         huaa  kharchaa bahut daaru mein apnaa..,
                         kuch  pepsi-wepsi  bhi magwaaein kyaa..,

Ha haha achcah hai jee daad Usual Smile

                         kho  gaye gar duniya ki bheed mein tum..,
                         tumhein  tum  se  phir  milwaaein kyaa..,

Kia kahne janab achcha hai daad milwane ka tareeqa bhi bayaN
kar dena tha ... tongue3


                         hanstaa  rahaa   zamaanaa  taumr hum pe..,
                         apni bebasi pe tumhein bhi hansaaein kyaa..,

Kia kahne janab waaH bahut khoob bahut umdaa daad daad daad Usual Smile

                         haraam ki daulat pe hajj qabul nahin hota..,
                         iss umr mein halaal ki rozi kamaaein kyaa..,

Kia kahne janab... itni khari baat itne sidhe se nahi kahte hai
janab... dil dukh jaate haiN ... Usual Smile


                         de ijaazat hamein aaj bazm-e-adab bechain..,
                         bina  bahr  ki  ek   ghazal sunaaein kyaa..,

Ijazat hai janab hazaroN gazaleN sunaiye be baher sahiN
koi rok tok nahi hai .... tongue3


                         

                         
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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2012, 09:01:38 AM »
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waah !
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«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2012, 09:11:21 AM »
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waah ek rau dilwaayen kyaa
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«Reply #6 on: May 26, 2012, 09:19:28 AM »
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Bahut khoob Adil ji,hmm kya baat hai.excellent icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: May 26, 2012, 10:37:46 AM »
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                         karaamat  lafz.on  ki  dikhaaein kyaa...,
                         baat   se  baat   ko  badhaaein kyaa...,

                         ek hi mohabbat mein cheekh riyaa hai..,
                         tujhe maashuka ke naam ginwaaein kyaa..,

                         huaa  kharchaa bahut daaru mein apnaa..,
                         kuch  pepsi-wepsi  bhi magwaaein kyaa..,

                         kho  gaye gar duniya ki bheed mein tum..,
                         tumhein  tum  se  phir  milwaaein kyaa..,

                         hanstaa  rahaa   zamaanaa  taumr hum pe..,
                         apni bebasi pe tumhein bhi hansaaein kyaa..,

                         haraam ki daulat pe hajj qabul nahin hota..,
                         iss umr mein halaal ki rozi kamaaein kyaa..,

                         de ijaazat hamein aaj bazm-e-adab bechain..,
                         bina  bahr  ki  ek   ghazal sunaaein kyaa..,
                         

                         


Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Kya Kehne Adil Ji Shaandar Peshkash!!

Bahut Mazedaar Aur Bahut bahut Khoob!!!

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«Reply #8 on: May 26, 2012, 02:52:22 PM »
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bohot khub adil ji....
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«Reply #9 on: May 26, 2012, 05:15:23 PM »
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bahut acche
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«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2012, 12:21:06 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2012, 03:56:25 PM »
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nice one
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Adil ji....!!!

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waahhhhhhh

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«Reply #14 on: September 09, 2012, 11:24:47 AM »
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Bechain Sahab Adaab !


Waah janab waaH kia baat hai bahut khoob janab..... Usual Smile
Kia mazahiyaa Kalaam pesh ki hai aapne...  Sabhi khayaal behad khoob
rahe janab waaH bahut khoob.... Usual Smile


Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye ... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile





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