Tel jale!!!!!

by kumaravasthi on June 20, 2005, 02:24:54 PM
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I have some line of text, could any body connect these line to make a complete poetry. Have a try, Plssssss...........

Tel (OIL) jale baati jale aur, Naam DIYA ka hoe.

Lal (CHILD) khelen kisi aur ke par Naam piya ka hoye.
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«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2005, 04:53:07 PM »
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Tel (OIL) jale baati jale aur, Naam DIYA ka hoe
tumse itni badboo aati hai,koi badboodaar bhi tere pass na soye............................
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«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2005, 07:26:50 PM »
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Tel (OIL) jale baati jale
aur Naam DIYA ka hoe
tum hil rahi ho aur naach dikha rahi ho
par koi paisa na pheke
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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2005, 11:25:08 AM »
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TEL JALE, BAATI JALE AUR NAAM DIYA KA HOYE,
LAL KHELE KISI AUR KE PUR NAAM PIYA KA HOYE,
PUR TUM KYON ITNA JAL RAHE HO "KUMARAVASTHI",
KYON UNHE DEKH TUM DAHADE MAAR MAAR KAR ROYE......


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I have some line of text, could any body connect these line to make a complete poetry. Have a try, Plssssss...........

Tel (OIL) jale baati jale aur, Naam DIYA ka hoe.

Lal (CHILD) khelen kisi aur ke par Naam piya ka hoye.
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kumaravasthi
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«Reply #4 on: June 22, 2005, 03:05:05 PM »
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Thanks for Every bodies reply!!!

But I was expecting a much better response from some of my super active members. But anyways,

Thanks to All
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2005, 03:14:17 PM »
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Tel (OIL) jale baati jale aur, Naam DIYA ka hoe
shakeel ek din tujhe maar doongi,or naam tere doston ka hoye...................
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2005, 03:20:30 PM »
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Tel (OIL) jale baati jale aur, Naam DIYA ka hoe
tum par wohi garam tel hi daal dounga,
aur phir tum zindagi bhar rahoge soe
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