---tere hansne me wo baat nahi---

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tere hanse me wo baat nahi
       jo tere rone me hai………
tujhe ‘ paane ’ me wo baat nahi
        jo tujhe ‘ khone ’ me hai………!!!!

tere sath wo maja nahi ‘ jaana ’
        jo maja akele ‘ sone ’ me hai………

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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2011, 11:31:10 AM »
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tere hanse me wo baat nahi
       jo tere rone me hai………
tujhe ‘ paane ’ me wo baat nahi
        jo tujhe ‘ khone ’ me hai………!!!!

tere sath wo maja nahi ‘ jaana ’
        jo maja akele ‘ sone ’ me hai………

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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2011, 11:43:54 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2011, 01:26:38 PM »
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badhya hai killu...sply last line
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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2011, 01:30:14 PM »
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badhya hai killu...sply last line
papaji……
aapne last ko hi acha ku kaha ?
kaha ho aap ?
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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2011, 01:33:36 PM »
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hum to yahi hai bachcha...bus tumhari nazar hum per nahi padti hai

aapne badhya likha hai lekin last line badhya se bhi badhya hai
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«Reply #6 on: May 04, 2011, 01:43:24 PM »
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hum to yahi hai bachcha...bus tumhari nazar hum per nahi padti hai

aapne badhya likha hai lekin last line badhya se bhi badhya hai
aap par mazar padti h kbi kbi awargi me…
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