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tum bin hum aise hai

jaise loota hua koi bank
jaise pani ka khali tank

jaise bin CPU ka computer
jaise pin pahiye ki scooter

jaise bin goli ki bandook
jaise bin pages ki book

jaise bin battery ke torch
jaise bin chabi ke lock

jaise bin dhaar ka chaaku
jaise bin dadhi mooch ka daaku

jaise bin petrol ki gaadi
jaise bin bagh ke maali

jaise bin teeli ki maachis
jaise bin suger ke sweet dish

jaise bin sabzi ke katora
jaise bin besan ke pakora

jaise bin namak ki daal
jaise bin khopdi ke baal
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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2009, 08:32:13 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah kya baat hai, aap to majahiya me bahut khoob likhte hai janab.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

aapke saath likhne ki gustakhi kar rahe hai, gustakhi kabool ho  Giggle!!!!

tum bin mein 

jaise tooti hui kali,
jaise diwaar pe akeli chipkali,

jaise bin paani ke holi,
jaise bhaagi hui ladki ki doli,

jaise bache ki bandook se nikli goli,
jaise andhere me bhootni bhooli,

jaise bin lehnge ke choli,
jaise khushi hui to u hi ro-li,

jaise paiso se fatti hui jholi,
jaise haath se khuli hui mouli..

Shally.
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2009, 08:34:18 AM »
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wah wah shally

jaise bina joote ka moza
jaise murgi bina hai chooza

jaise choosa hua koi aam
jaise bhool gaye koi kaam

jaise driver bina hai CAR
jaise PM bina koi sarkar
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2009, 08:39:16 AM »
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Thanx Samnoj ji aapne bhi kya khoob likha hai. Applause  Applause

jaise chane ke bin jhaad,
jaise diya ho chatti par se kisi ne utaar,

jaise ke paani me ham aur dhaar,
jaise gandi chadar aur sirahana khushbudaar,

jaise nache meera gungroo utaar,
jaise bin taaroo ke baje gitaar,

jaise tede-mede ajeeb vichaar,
jaise tu aur mein takrayein baar-baar..

Shally.
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2009, 08:41:29 AM »
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badhya hai SHALLYYYYYYYYYYY

jaise sonia bina congress
jaise ghode bina ho race

jaise bander ke sir ke baal
jaise uter gayi ho khaal

jaise naadi bina paijaama
jaise rooth gayi meri maa
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2009, 09:56:17 AM »
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 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
waah waah waah waah
kya khub mnoj ji aur shally ji...
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«Reply #6 on: June 05, 2009, 09:20:08 PM »
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Good going !
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2009, 06:47:52 AM »
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thanx pop n cera

jaise phati hui patloon
piya chale gaye rangoon

jaise down ho gaya net
jaise bhikari ka khali pet
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2009, 06:53:45 AM »
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very very nice Sanmoj ji and Shally ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2009, 06:59:06 AM »
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thanks madhuwesh
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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2009, 02:26:42 PM »
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hahaha very good... Sam and Shally  Applause  Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2009, 11:10:25 AM »
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thanx Roja
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2009, 11:15:53 AM »
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Kya baat hai wah wah
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«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2009, 11:16:44 AM »
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thanx sarvesh
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«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2009, 11:20:56 AM »
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Sam bro and Shally

Wah ! wah ! wah ! mazaa aa gaya Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

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