~Tumare Bina~(NM)

by Sonia01 on July 15, 2008, 03:53:01 PM
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sarthika
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«Reply #15 on: July 25, 2008, 01:09:41 AM »
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bahoot khoob Sonia and Bekarar ji...

Sonia app ki hi line lekar.... kuch changes ke sath likhne ki koshish ki hai..

Tumharay Bina Zindagi mai hai......................,
dhamaka!!!!

Tum he Mera ..........................,
pataka !!!!!!!!!

Tumhi se laga hai yah................'
jhatka

Ye Dil to tumhi per hai.................,
Attka !!!!!

Tumhi to ho meray..................,
Gajar ka halwa !!!!!!!!!

Ab to dekhon Tumharay hi................,
jalwa !!!!!!!!!!!

Tumhi to ho meri ..................,
dhoom

Jo tum ho saath to her shaam hai ...............,
boom boom

Tum he to meri Lazeez ................,
khane !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ab to aa ja ZALIM........
kisi bahane.......
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«Reply #16 on: July 26, 2008, 05:36:05 PM »
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wow lovely posting dimpu... Applause and bekarar ji ...  tongue3
sahi main muh main paani aagaya hai... sayyied ji

and good work sarthika sis
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #17 on: July 27, 2008, 09:08:42 PM »
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lagta hai isk esailab main sab beh gaye.. tongue3

Agar us selaab mein kisi ke paas machhliyaN bhi behkar aai ho to bhejna meri pasamdidah he.  tongue3
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #18 on: July 27, 2008, 09:12:23 PM »
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bahoot khoob Sonia and Bekarar ji...

Sonia app ki hi line lekar.... kuch changes ke sath likhne ki koshish ki hai..

Tumharay Bina Zindagi mai hai......................,
dhamaka!!!!

Tum he Mera ..........................,
pataka !!!!!!!!!

Tumhi se laga hai yah................'
jhatka

Ye Dil to tumhi per hai.................,
Attka !!!!!

Tumhi to ho meray..................,
Gajar ka halwa !!!!!!!!!

Ab to dekhon Tumharay hi................,
jalwa !!!!!!!!!!!

Tumhi to ho meri ..................,
dhoom

Jo tum ho saath to her shaam hai ...............,
boom boom

Tum he to meri Lazeez ................,
khane !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ab to aa ja ZALIM........
kisi bahane.......

Bohot khoob sarthika sahiba, yahan ek or umda nazm shamil hui, lagta he aap ko gaajar ka halwa bohot pasand he. tongue3
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #19 on: July 27, 2008, 09:15:14 PM »
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wow lovely posting dimpu... Applause and bekarar ji ...  tongue3
sahi main muh main paani aagaya hai... sayyied ji

and good work sarthika sis


Shukriya Roja sahiba aap to bade dinoN baad tashreef laaye, Ummid he phir usi tarah apne behtareen kalaam se nawazenge.
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Kanta
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«Reply #20 on: August 08, 2008, 09:01:56 PM »
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han ye shayri to mast he bada majedar swad aya sonia.  tongue3

muje lado koe
wada pao

mun mein pani he
jaldi karo  NaNaNa
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