UBASI

by SURESH SANGWAN on March 28, 2010, 05:37:16 PM
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JAB CHHA JAATI HAI MAHAUL MEIN UDAASI sleepy4 sleepy4 sleepy4
TABHI TO AATI HAI UBAASI


JAISE HI THAKAAN HUI JARA SI
AANDHI KI TEZI SE CHALI AAI UBASI

JAB BHI HUM LETE HAI UBASI .
MUH SE NIKALTI HAI GARAM HAWA SI
 

APNAA APNAA TAREEKA HAI KUCH SADE DAANT CHIPAKAR,
TO KUCH LOG CHUTKIYAN BAJAKAR LETE HAI UBASI .


YAAD NAHIN HOTA MUJHE KOI BHI SAWAAL
JAB UBAASI MACHATI HAI DHAMAAL
 


MAZZE KARTE SAMAY CHUMANTAR HO JATI HAI UBASI
PADHAI KE WAQT KASAR NAHIN CHHODTI JARAASI.


KAKSHA  MEIN CHHATRA KO AATI HAI UBAASI.
AANTEE KO PRAWACHHAN MEIN AATI HAI UBAASI.
DAFTAR MEIN BAABU KO AATI HAI UBAASI.
BORE HO FILM TO AATI HAI UBAASI.


YE EK SANKRAMAK ROG HAI.
JISAKE BEEMAR HAZAARON LOG HAIN.


 BY --AAKARSHA
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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2010, 05:56:08 PM »
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Nice sharing Suresh Bhai....

Schchi hai ubasi satati hai ubasi,
Oxygen ki kami se aati hai ubasi..!
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2010, 07:19:34 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2010, 10:21:50 PM »
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good but at least not all in capital letters. yuk
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«Reply #4 on: March 29, 2010, 10:11:08 AM »
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good work suresh
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«Reply #5 on: March 29, 2010, 10:54:36 AM »
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Good sharing.....Thanks to Aakarsha... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: March 29, 2010, 11:20:33 AM »
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Good sharing Suresh Ji
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2010, 12:17:16 PM »
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Thanks drpandeyji.
you are right . icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Sachhi bada sataati hai ubasi.
lagaatar jab aati hai ubasi.

Nice sharing Suresh Bhai....

Schchi hai ubasi satati hai ubasi,
Oxygen ki kami se aati hai ubasi..!

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«Reply #8 on: March 29, 2010, 12:19:02 PM »
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thankyou kameeneyji.
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: March 29, 2010, 12:21:10 PM »
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kanta ji ye ek chhoti si bachhi ne likha hai.jisko ubaasi bahut aati hai.capitals ke baare mein usse jayada nahin pata tha.
good but at least not all in capital letters. yuk
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«Reply #10 on: March 29, 2010, 12:21:48 PM »
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THANKS SAMNOJ JI.
good work suresh
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«Reply #11 on: March 29, 2010, 12:23:16 PM »
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KOYAL JI THANKS A LOT ..AKARSHA IS A SMALL GIRL WHO WROTE IT IN MY GUIDANCE,
Good sharing.....Thank to Aakarsha
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«Reply #12 on: March 29, 2010, 12:23:56 PM »
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THANKS RAJESHJI,
Good sharing Suresh Ji
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«Reply #13 on: March 29, 2010, 12:59:40 PM »
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Very Nice Dear Akarsha.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks For Sharing Sureshji
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«Reply #14 on: March 29, 2010, 01:02:02 PM »
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a lot of thanks from aakarsha.
khwaishji.
Very Nice Dear Akarsha.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks For Sharing Sureshji

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