Umar Chaalis ki hai, Par Abhi Pyar Jawani ki Dehleez par hai

by Bhupinder Kaur on September 12, 2013, 07:52:43 PM
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Yeh Kavita kalpanik  hai aur content ka bhi vastvikata se koi nata nahin hai, isliye sabhi se nivedan hai ki Kavita ko seriously ...le ya na le yeh aapki marzeee



Umar chaalis ki hai
Par abhi
Pyar jawani ki dehleez par hai
Rishteyo se toh bandha ho
Par kasme vaade karne ko taiyar hoon
Ghar parivar bhi hai
Par armaano ka kehna hai
Abhi toh main azad hoon
Safedi baalo ki chamki rahee hai
Par dye khoob saath deti hai
Ankho ki roshni halki madham hai
Par abhi kisi Milan
Ki angadee umad rahee hai
Kisse, kahani b hai
Par abhi Ishq karne ki khwahisb b hai
Betaabi, bechaani bhi hai
Par abhi  dhadkane meri
Mohbaat ke liye deewani hai
Koi anjaani, jaani mile jaye bus
Keh do ush.. Haaye
dil toh abhi bachha hai ji
Kuch lamho k liye hi sahi
Pyar mera sucha hai ji
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«Reply #1 on: September 12, 2013, 09:15:58 PM »
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Achchi peshkash bhupinder ji.. par aapki kavita padhkar mujhe ek gaane ke kuch bol yaad aaye..

na umr ki seema ho, na janm ka ho bandhan,
jab pyaar kare koi, toh dekhe keval man,
nayi reet chalakar tum, yeh reet amar kar do...
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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2013, 10:01:51 PM »
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waah waah waah bahut khoob Bhupinder jee.
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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2013, 11:05:33 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2013, 11:08:59 PM »
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waese 40 may kuch nahi bigadta, Salman khan ko dekhen zinda misal hai 40+  Laughing hard
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waah waah waah bahut mazedaar peshkash hai bhupinder jee..

dhero dhero daad..happy9
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Quote from: aqsh on September 12, 2013, 09:15:58 PM
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Achchi peshkash bhupinder ji.. par aapki kavita padhkar mujhe ek gaane ke kuch bol yaad aaye..

na umr ki seema ho, na janm ka ho bandhan,
jab pyaar kare koi, toh dekhe keval man,
nayi reet chalakar tum, yeh reet amar kar do...


Aur aqsh jee apke upar likhi hua mera ye gaana yaad ni aaya..
hmmmm..?? Winking tongue3

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«Reply #8 on: September 13, 2013, 02:55:53 AM »
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Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on September 12, 2013, 07:52:43 PM
Yeh Kavita kalpanik  hai aur content ka bhi vastvikata se koi nata nahin hai, isliye sabhi se nivedan hai ki thread ko seriously ...le ya na le yeh aapki marzeee



Umar chaalis ki hai
Par abhi
Pyar jawani ki dehleez par hai
Rishteyo se toh bandha ho
Par kasme vaade karne ko taiyar hoon
Ghar parivar bhi hai
Par armaano ka kehna hai
Abhi toh main azad hoon
Safedi baalo ki chamki rahee hai
Par dye khoob saath deti hai
Ankho ki roshni halki madham hai
Par abhi kisi Milan
Ki angadee umad rahee hai
Kisse, kahani b hai
Par abhi Ishq karne ki khwahisb b hai
Betaabi, bechaani bhi hai
Par abhi  dhadkane meri
Mohbaat ke liye deewani hai
Koi anjaani, jaani mile jaye bus
Keh do ush.. Haaye
dil toh abhi bachha hai ji
Kuch lamho k liye hi sahi
Pyar mera sucha hai ji



"Safedi Baalon Ki Chamak Rahi Hai"....


Objection My lord.....Kya 40 Ki Umar Mein Safedi Aa Jaati Hai?? I Have a Very Strong Doubt Inder Ji....Prove Kar Ke Bataao yeh???  tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3


Waise Post Te Masttttttttttttttttttttt hai Par Yaar 40 Ko Aapne 60 Bana Diya Iss Poetry Ki Mutaabik...


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«Reply #9 on: September 13, 2013, 11:46:30 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on September 12, 2013, 09:15:58 PM
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Achchi peshkash bhupinder ji.. par aapki kavita padhkar mujhe ek gaane ke kuch bol yaad aaye..

na umr ki seema ho, na janm ka ho bandhan,
jab pyaar kare koi, toh dekhe keval man,
nayi reet chalakar tum, yeh reet amar kar do...

Song is very beautiful & meaningful par jo Flirty ho unpar yeh kaise lagu ho???
As in my last lines I wrote "Kuch lamho k liye hi sahi
                             Pyar mera sucha hai ji"
Umar bhar ke liye nahi....
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«Reply #10 on: September 13, 2013, 11:55:15 AM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on September 12, 2013, 11:08:59 PM
bahot khoooob Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
waese 40 may kuch nahi bigadta, Salman khan ko dekhen zinda misal hai 40+  Laughing hard
Man's like Salmaan r xpectional ji & waise bhi yeh toh meri kalpana hai ji nothing in personal.
Woh Kya kehta hai nai "Aadmi or Ghodda kabhi budhe nahi hote."
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Quote from: nashwani on September 13, 2013, 12:45:51 AM
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waah waah waah bahut mazedaar peshkash hai bhupinder jee..

dhero dhero daad..happy9
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waah waah waah bahut khoob Bhupinder jee.
Aap Sabhi ka Bahut Shukriya..
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Quote from: khwahish on September 13, 2013, 02:55:53 AM

"Safedi Baalon Ki Chamak Rahi Hai"....


Objection My lord.....Kya 40 Ki Umar Mein Safedi Aa Jaati Hai?? I Have a Very Strong Doubt Inder Ji....Prove Kar Ke Bataao yeh???  tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3


Waise Post Te Masttttttttttttttttttttt hai Par Yaar 40 Ko Aapne 60 Bana Diya Iss Poetry Ki Mutaabik...


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Objection Over Ruled:
As there is no Specific age for greying of hairs & in current generation Age of Life has bn gone down so 40/60 sab chalta hai ji...
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«Reply #13 on: September 13, 2013, 02:23:53 PM »
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hammare baal bilkul safed hain umr bhee chaalis ke to paar hai hee par hame bilkul buraa naheen lagaa balki main ise bahut appriciate kartaa hoon
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 13, 2013, 02:23:53 PM
hammare baal bilkul safed hain umr bhee chaalis ke to paar hai hee par hame bilkul buraa naheen lagaa balki main ise bahut appriciate kartaa hoon
Sirji, White hair is a Crown of Glory & You are the King with Wisdom & Mine post is not abut criticizing jus a Chill Pill
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