VYASTATA--by ghanshamdas ahuja

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(kripya vajan par dhyaan na dete hue pade, dhanyavaad )
                         
          VYASTATA
   
AAJ-KAL HAR KOI APNE MEIN HI VYAST HAI.
KYA HUA YEH DUNIA KYON ITNEE PAST HAI.
JANTAA CHAAHE KITANA BHI HOVE DUKHEE
NETA PAISA BANAANE MEIN SIDHHAST HAI.
JANTA KA BHALA KARENGE KAISE
INKEE AKAL PAR CHHAI RUST HAI.
BAAP KITNA BHI HOVE GAREEB  
DAHEJ MEIN SCOOTER TO MUST HAI.
SACCHA PYAAR AB DIKHTA NAHIN
DIKH RAHA VO PYAAR NAHIN LUST HAI.
GAYATRI MANTRA KAUN KARE YAAD
FILMI GAANA BADAA KANTHAST HAI
ANGREJI MEIN KARTE CHATAR-MATAR AKSAR
PARVAAH KISE HINDI KO KITANA KASHT HAI.
PAR KOI CHAHE KUCHH BHI KAHE‘GHANSHAM’
APNI DUNIA MEIN RAHTA SADAA MAST HAI.


          व्यस्तता  
   
आजकल हर कोई अपने में ही व्यस्त है
क्या हुआ यह दुनिया क्यों इतनी पस्त है।
जनता चाहे कितना भी होवे दुखी  
नेता पैसा बनाने में सिध्हस्त हैं।
जनता का भला करेंगे कैसे  
इनकी अकल पर छाई रस्ट  है।  
बाप कितना भी होवे गरीब
दहेज़ में स्कूटर  तो मस्ट है।
सच्चा प्यार अब दिखता नहीं
दिख रहा वो प्यार नहीं लस्ट है।
गायत्री-मंत्र कौन करे याद  
फ़िल्मी गाना बडा कंठस्त  है।
अंगरेजी में करते चटर -मटर  अक्सर
परवाह किसे हिन्दी को कितना कष्ट  है।
पर कोई चाहे कुछ भी कहे 'घनशाम '
अपनी दुनिया में रहता सदा मस्त है।

Ghanshamdas Ahuja
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2013, 11:37:38 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob
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Quote from: ahujagd on January 21, 2013, 11:04:05 AM
(kripya vajan par dhyaan na dete hue pade, dhanyavaad )
                          
          VYASTATA
    
AAJ-KAL HAR KOI APNE MEIN HI VYAST HAI.
KYA HUA YEH DUNIA KYON ITNEE PAST HAI.
JANTAA CHAAHE KITANA BHI HOVE DUKHEE
NETA PAISA BANAANE MEIN SIDHHAST HAI.
JANTA KA BHALA KARENGE KAISE
INKEE AKAL PAR CHHAI RUST HAI.
BAAP KITNA BHI HOVE GAREEB  
DAHEJ MEIN SCOOTER TO MUST HAI.
SACCHA PYAAR AB DIKHTA NAHIN
DIKH RAHA VO PYAAR NAHIN LUST HAI.
GAYATRI MANTRA KAUN KARE YAAD
FILMI GAANA BADAA KANTHAST HAI
ANGREJI MEIN KARTE CHATAR-MATAR AKSAR
PARVAAH KISE HINDI KO KITANA KASHT HAI.
PAR KOI CHAHE KUCHH BHI KAHE‘GHANSHAM’
APNI DUNIA MEIN RAHTA SADAA MAST HAI.


          व्यस्तता  
    
आजकल हर कोई अपने में ही व्यस्त है
क्या हुआ यह दुनिया क्यों इतनी पस्त है।
जनता चाहे कितना भी होवे दुखी  
नेता पैसा बनाने में सिध्हस्त हैं।
जनता का भला करेंगे कैसे  
इनकी अकल पर छाई रस्ट  है।  
बाप कितना भी होवे गरीब
दहेज़ में स्कूटर  तो मस्ट है।
सच्चा प्यार अब दिखता नहीं
दिख रहा वो प्यार नहीं लस्ट है।
गायत्री-मंत्र कौन करे याद  
फ़िल्मी गाना बडा कंठस्त  है।
अंगरेजी में करते चटर -मटर  अक्सर
परवाह किसे हिन्दी को कितना कष्ट  है।
पर कोई चाहे कुछ भी कहे 'घनशाम '
अपनी दुनिया में रहता सदा मस्त है।

Ghanshamdas Ahuja


good waise rust ka matlab kya hai...........!
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Bahut khooooooobsurat
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good waise rust ka matlab kya hai...........!
sheba ji,
   bahut bahut aabhar.yahan mera mantavya hai ki unki akal pe rust(jang-Corrosion)roopi parda pada hai. kahin kahin angreji bhasha ka prayog anyantra bhi kiya hai aapne dekha hi hoga, jaise ki "MUST" aur "LUST"

shubh kaamnayen
 
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aqsh ji hausala-e-afzai ke liye bahut bahut aabhaar.
shubhkaamnayen
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on January 21, 2013, 11:59:17 AM
Bahut khooooooobsurat
Masoom Shahzada ji,

bahut bahut dhanyavaad aapko rachna pasand aayee mujhe bhi achha laga.
shubh kaamnayen
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boht khub gd sahab waah waah
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sheba ji,
   bahut bahut aabhar.yahan mera mantavya hai ki unki akal pe rust(jang-Corrosion)roopi parda pada hai. kahin kahin angreji bhasha ka prayog anyantra bhi kiya hai aapne dekha hi hoga, jaise ki "MUST" aur "LUST"

shubh kaamnayen
 
ghansham das ahuja

very nice, so you have used english kafia as rhyming word ............!
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bahut sundar , ahuja ji . achhi kavita prastut ki hai . jaldi jaldi Yoindia Shayariadab per likhte rahye. kavita per dheron daad .
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saahill ji,

    bahut bahut dhanyavaad aap jaise bade shairon ko rachna pasand aayee, is roop mein meri yeh pahli koshish thee,isliye kuchh shabd angreji bhasha se udhaar liye hain.
shubhkaamnayen

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bahut sundar , ahuja ji . achhi kavita prastut ki hai . jaldi jaldi Yoindia Shayariadab per likhte rahye. kavita per dheron daad .
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thanks a lot hasan bhai aapne samay nikaal kar mujh naacheej ki rachna padi hi nahin apna comment bhi diya mere liye yahi bahut hai.aapki daad ke liye fir ek baar aabhaar.
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waah waah... bahut bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: suman59 on January 22, 2013, 02:21:50 PM
waah waah... bahut bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank you very much suman ji, aapki taaliyon ki gadgarahat ne psannta ka mahol la diya.
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