कवि को बद्दुआ

by bekarar on March 27, 2012, 03:51:00 PM
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कवि को बद्दुआ

तेरे हल से जूते खेत, खाद को तरसे,
हर तेरी लिखी ग़ज़ल, दाद को तरसे,

तेरे कलामो से इतने घबरा जाए लोग,
तू बिल्डिंग के वाचंमेन के भी, साथ को तरसे,

एन वक़्त पे तेरी लिखी कविता खो जाए,
तू मंच पे खड़ा मदद के हाथ को तरसे,

मंच पे कुछ सुनाए बिना ही कुख्यात हो जाए,
अंडे, टमाटर, तेरी और बेबात को बरसे,

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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2012, 12:56:31 AM »
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कवि को बद्दुआ

तेरे हल से जूते खेत, खाद को तरसे,
हर तेरी लिखी ग़ज़ल, दाद को तरसे,

तेरे कलामो से इतने घबरा जाए लोग,
तू बिल्डिंग के वाचंमेन के भी, साथ को तरसे,

एन वक़्त पे तेरी लिखी कविता खो जाए,
तू मंच पे खड़ा मदद के हाथ को तरसे,

मंच पे कुछ सुनाए बिना ही कुख्यात हो जाए,
अंडे, टमाटर, तेरी और बेबात को बरसे,


Waah bekraar ji kanhe badduwa kavi ko dilwa rahe hain. . badhiyan hai   Applause Applause Laughing hard Laughing hard Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2012, 04:02:18 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2012, 01:03:23 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2012, 01:26:39 PM »
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extra ordinary lines bekaraar ji
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«Reply #5 on: March 29, 2012, 07:41:45 PM »
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कवि को बद्दुआ

तेरे हल से जूते खेत, खाद को तरसे,
हर तेरी लिखी ग़ज़ल, दाद को तरसे,

तेरे कलामो से इतने घबरा जाए लोग,
तू बिल्डिंग के वाचंमेन के भी, साथ को तरसे,

एन वक़्त पे तेरी लिखी कविता खो जाए,
तू मंच पे खड़ा मदद के हाथ को तरसे,

मंच पे कुछ सुनाए बिना ही कुख्यात हो जाए,
अंडे, टमाटर, तेरी और बेबात को बरसे,


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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2012, 05:40:10 AM »
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Bahut badhiya bekarar Saheb.
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Magar akhiri do lines to baddua nahi bhagwaan ka asirwaad hai. Aap sabjiyaan khareedne nahi jaate kya?Ismein bas ande, tamaatar ke saath bhindi, gobhi bhi jod dete to mazaa aa jaata. Log aisi dua har shayar ko de to do waqt chulha to achchhe se jalega. tongue3 tongue3 tongue3
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