क़तात /Qataat..................................SAINI

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माने हैं अब जनाब बड़ी   मुद्दतों के बाद |

ख़त का दिया जवाब बड़ी मुद्दतों के बाद ||

बालों की चांदनी पे  बुढापे  के  इश्क़ में |

रंग लाया है ख़िज़ाब बड़ी मुद्दतों के बाद ||



 

चौखट पे जिसकी रोज़ समय  काटते रहे |

लालच भरी  निगाह लिए  ताकते  रहे ||

हमसे भी पहलेशौख़ को ले कौन कब उड़ा |

हम बेक़रार दिल को  लिए  टापते  रहे ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी

 


Maane  haiN  ab  janaab badee muddatoN ke baad.
Khat kaa  diyaa  jwaab  badee muddatoN ke baad.
BaaloN kee  chaandnee pe  budhaape ke ishq meN.
Rang laayaa hai khizaab badee muddatoN ke baad.



Chaukhat  pe  jiskee  roz samay kaatte rahe.
Laalach  bharee  nigaah  liye  taakte  rahe.
Hamse bhee pahle shaukh ko le kaun kab udaa.
Ham  beqaraar  dil   ko  liye  taapte  rahe.

Dr.Surendra Saini
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2012, 11:32:19 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Its an example of GOOD Mature shayri...janaab
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2012, 11:41:37 AM »
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Waah waah...Saini Sahab...thodi der ko to mujhe bhi apni umra ka
ehsaas na hua...bahut khoob...Raqeeb
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2012, 11:43:43 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Saini Jee. Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2012, 11:45:42 AM »
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bahut khoob Saini Ji,  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2012, 11:55:01 AM »
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waah..Saini Ji, kya kamaal likhte hain aap, bahut khoob, dheron daad
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2012, 12:48:09 PM »
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BahutKhoob ,Saaini saheb .
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2012, 05:25:20 PM »
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Bhoot khoob
माने हैं अब जनाब बड़ी   मुद्दतों के बाद |

ख़त का दिया जवाब बड़ी मुद्दतों के बाद ||

बालों की चांदनी पे  बुढापे  के  इश्क़ में |

रंग लाया है ख़िज़ाब बड़ी मुद्दतों के बाद ||



 

चौखट पे जिसकी रोज़ समय  काटते रहे |

लालच भरी  निगाह लिए  ताकते  रहे ||

हमसे भी पहलेशौख़ को ले कौन कब उड़ा |

हम बेक़रार दिल को  लिए  टापते  रहे ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी

 


Maane  haiN  ab  janaab badee muddatoN ke baad.
Khat kaa  diyaa  jwaab  badee muddatoN ke baad.
BaaloN kee  chaandnee pe  budhaape ke ishq meN.
Rang laayaa hai khizaab badee muddatoN ke baad.



Chaukhat  pe  jiskee  roz samay kaatte rahe.
Laalach  bharee  nigaah  liye  taakte  rahe.
Hamse bhee pahle shaukh ko le kaun kab udaa.
Ham  beqaraar  dil   ko  liye  taapte  rahe.

Dr.Surendra Saini

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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2012, 05:37:40 PM »
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maza aa gaya parh kar.
TARIF KARNE KE LIYE MUJH NA CHHEZ KE PAAS LAFZ NAHIN HAI
SAINI JI KI SHAYRI PE KUCHH KAHNE KI MERI AUQAT NAHI HAI

ITNA TO FAQT KHINE KI JURAT KAHOONGA ZAROOR
ASINI JI AAP HAMARA SALAAM KQABOOL KIJYEGA ZAROOR   
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2012, 11:31:16 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah..
Bahaut bahaut ala Saini jee..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2012, 11:37:22 PM »
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wah kya khoob kaha sainiji
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«Reply #11 on: June 29, 2012, 02:01:17 AM »
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bahut khub bahut hi badhiya likha hai aapne saini sir.............

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«Reply #12 on: June 29, 2012, 03:18:35 AM »
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 Applause   kya baat hai sir lajwab qat aat kahe hai , bohut umda , wah wah wah wah wah wah
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«Reply #13 on: June 29, 2012, 03:54:30 AM »
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great sir
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bahut bahut khub saini saheb, kamal hai app sir
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