घनाक्षरी छंद

by ramspathak on May 18, 2013, 09:00:41 PM
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बन गया हूँ भिखारी ,लगी थी प्रेम बीमारी !
थोड़ी दया दिखाकर ,मुझको बचाइये !
मुझको ऐसा निचोड़ा ,अब कहीं का ना छोड़ा !
जान बच जाय ऐसी ,युक्ति तो बताइए !!

माना गलती हो गयी ,थोड़ी देर कर गया !
बालक समझकर ,कष्ट से उबारिये !
कान पकड़कर अब ,माफ़ी मांगता हूँ भाई !
दुर्दशा को देखकर ,हंसी ना उड़ाइए !

राम शिरोमणि पाठक "दीपक"
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2013, 09:39:17 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2013, 09:41:03 PM »
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hardik aabhar sudhir ji
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Quote from: ramspathak on May 18, 2013, 09:00:41 PM
बन गया हूँ भिखारी ,लगी थी प्रेम बीमारी !
थोड़ी दया दिखाकर ,मुझको बचाइये !
मुझको ऐसा निचोड़ा ,अब कहीं का ना छोड़ा !
जान बच जाय ऐसी ,युक्ति तो बताइए !!

माना गलती हो गयी ,थोड़ी देर कर गया !
बालक समझकर ,कष्ट से उबारिये !
कान पकड़कर अब ,माफ़ी मांगता हूँ भाई !
दुर्दशा को देखकर ,हंसी ना उड़ाइए !

राम शिरोमणि पाठक "दीपक"
Deepak ji bhut khub...
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2013, 01:32:14 PM »
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Quote from: ramspathak on May 18, 2013, 09:00:41 PM
बन गया हूँ भिखारी ,लगी थी प्रेम बीमारी !
थोड़ी दया दिखाकर ,मुझको बचाइये !
मुझको ऐसा निचोड़ा ,अब कहीं का ना छोड़ा !
जान बच जाय ऐसी ,युक्ति तो बताइए !!

माना गलती हो गयी ,थोड़ी देर कर गया !
बालक समझकर ,कष्ट से उबारिये !
कान पकड़कर अब ,माफ़ी मांगता हूँ भाई !
दुर्दशा को देखकर ,हंसी ना उड़ाइए !

राम शिरोमणि पाठक "दीपक"
bohut badiya likha hai,,.par hasi to aai hai..
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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hahahaha. bahut khoob...
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