फ़ाइलों में फंसाया/FaailoN meN faNsaayaa ..............SAINI

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फ़ाइलों    में   फंसाया  गया |

मुझको जी  भर सताया  गया ||


घर में दफ़्तर में क्या हर जगह |

उँगलियों  पर   नचाया  गया ||


इक  तरक्क़ी  न  पाई  कभी |

ज़िंदगी  भर   घुमाया  गया ||


ज़ीस्त का मुझको देकर फ़रेब |

कब्र  में  ही  लिटाया गया ||


आँख उनसे लड़ी बस  तभी |

मुझको सूली चढ़ाया  गया ||
 

जब तमंचा न काम आ सका |

मुस्कुरा  कर  डराया  गया ||


मेरी ख़ातिर को  उनके  यहाँ |

सब रक़ीबों को  लाया  गया ||


अम्न की बात कर करके रोज़ |

बस  तमाशा  बनाया  गया ||



डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी

 


FaailoN   meN   faNsaayaa    gayaa.
Mujhko  jee  bhar  sataayaa  gayaa.

Ghar meN daftar men kyaa har jagah.
UNgliyoN    par   nachaayaa  gayaa.

Ik   tarakqee   n   payee  kabhee.
Zindagee  bhar   ghumaayaa  gayaa.

Zeest  kaa   mujhko  dekar  fareb.
Kabr  meN  hee   litaayaa   gayaa.

AaNkh  unse  ladee  bas   tabhee.
Mujhko  soolee  chadhaayaa gayaa.

Jab  tamaNchaa  n  kaam aa sakaa.
Muskuraa   kar   daraayaa  gayaa.

Meree  khaatir  ko  unke  yahaaN.
Sab  raqeeboN  ko  laayaa  gayaa.

Amn  kee  baat   kar  karke roz.
Bas  tamaashaa  banaayaa  gayaa.

Dr. Surendra  Saini  
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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2011, 05:04:18 AM »
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Bahut khoob Saini saheb,tanz o mazaah bhari achhi peshkash.Hasan
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«Reply #2 on: November 01, 2011, 06:17:03 AM »
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फ़ाइलों    में   फंसाया  गया |

मुझको जी  भर सताया  गया ||


घर में दफ़्तर में क्या हर जगह |

उँगलियों  पर   नचाया  गया ||


इक  तरक्क़ी  न  पाई  कभी |

ज़िंदगी  भर   घुमाया  गया ||


ज़ीस्त का मुझको देकर फ़रेब |

कब्र  में  ही  लिटाया गया ||


आँख उनसे लड़ी बस  तभी |

मुझको सूली चढ़ाया  गया ||
 

जब तमंचा न काम आ सका |

मुस्कुरा  कर  डराया  गया ||


मेरी ख़ातिर को  उनके  यहाँ |

सब रक़ीबों को  लाया  गया ||


अम्न की बात कर करके रोज़ |

बस  तमाशा  बनाया  गया ||



डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी

 


FaailoN   meN   faNsaayaa    gayaa.
Mujhko  jee  bhar  sataayaa  gayaa.

Ghar meN daftar men kyaa har jagah.
UNgliyoN    par   nachaayaa  gayaa.  Applause Applause
Ab to apki shikayat karni padegi..

Ik   tarakqee   n   payee  kabhee.
Zindagee  bhar   ghumaayaa  gayaa.  Applause  Applause

Zeest  kaa   mujhko  dekar  fareb.
Kabr  meN  hee   litaayaa   gayaa.

AaNkh  unse  ladee  bas   tabhee.
Mujhko  soolee  chadhaayaa gayaa.

Jab  tamaNchaa  n  kaam aa sakaa.
Muskuraa   kar   daraayaa  gayaa. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Meree  khaatir  ko  unke  yahaaN.
Sab  raqeeboN  ko  laayaa  gayaa.  Applause I hope u r fine ?

Amn  kee  baat   kar  karke roz.
Bas  tamaashaa  banaayaa  gayaa.  Applause  Applause

Dr. Surendra  Saini   

Bahut khoob likha hai Saini Sahab
Daastaan-e -office..jindgi ka har rang isme shamil hai..bahut maja aaya. comment pe jyada gaur na kijiyega.
i'm little bit surprised to see this beautiful creation which is probably not much concerned with U. Fantastic.
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«Reply #3 on: November 01, 2011, 02:49:40 PM »
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बहुत ख़ूब | अच्छी गजल | शुभकामनायें |

-अरुण मिश्र.   
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«Reply #4 on: November 01, 2011, 03:39:06 PM »
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saini ji bahut khoob
kamaal kar diya.
daad kubool kijiye.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: November 02, 2011, 03:33:36 AM »
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Hasan saheb shukriya
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«Reply #6 on: November 02, 2011, 03:40:18 AM »
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Mukesh ji bade pyaare comments diye.

log...saini ji peete ho ?
saini....No
log...  paan, nonveg aadi khaate ho ?
saini....No
log...taash juaa aadi khelte ho?
saini...No
log... ishq kiyaa hai.
saini .... No
log... fir shayar kaise ?
saini... baaraat men jaane ke liye dilhaa banna zaroori hai kya?
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«Reply #7 on: November 02, 2011, 03:42:08 AM »
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अरुण जी आपने ग़ज़ल पसंद की  बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद
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«Reply #8 on: November 02, 2011, 03:43:37 AM »
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sanwaan ji daad ke liye shukriyaa. aapki muhabbat mujhe himmat deti hai.
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«Reply #9 on: November 02, 2011, 04:48:24 PM »
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Mukesh ji bade pyaare comments diye.

log...saini ji peete ho ?
saini....No
log...  paan, nonveg aadi khaate ho ?
saini....No
log...taash juaa aadi khelte ho?
saini...No
log... ishq kiyaa hai.
saini .... No
log... fir shayar kaise ?
saini... baaraat men jaane ke liye dilhaa banna zaroori hai kya?
Kya baat hai saini Sir
Aj to aap bilkul mood me hai.. mai samajh gaya.

Vaise ek comment apne ignore kar diya ? waiting 4 yr sweet reply.
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«Reply #10 on: November 03, 2011, 07:49:28 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai...mza aa gya padhkar  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: November 03, 2011, 08:36:15 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sainiji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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khwaish ji shukriya
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