हास्य घनाक्षरी छंद (८८८७ वर्ण )

by ramspathak on April 17, 2013, 11:52:24 PM
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लड़ती पीट तालियाँ, हज़ार देती गालियाँ,

अच्छे भले दिमाग का, दही कर देती है |

हर पल तंग करे, उल्टे पुल्टे कर्म करे,

मंगल जैसे ग्रह को, शनि कर देती है |

यदि देख लिया पैसा, पूछे नही कि है कैसा,

झट-पट बटुए को, खाली कर देती है |

भूल से भी पूछ लिया, पैसा कहाँ खर्च किया,

इतनी सी बात पे ही, ठोक पीट देती है |

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"
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«Reply #1 on: April 18, 2013, 12:08:45 AM »
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लड़ती पीट तालियाँ, हज़ार देती गालियाँ,

अच्छे भले दिमाग का, दही कर देती है |

हर पल तंग करे, उल्टे पुल्टे कर्म करे,

मंगल जैसे ग्रह को, शनि कर देती है |

यदि देख लिया पैसा, पूछे नही कि है कैसा,

झट-पट बटुए को, खाली कर देती है |

भूल से भी पूछ लिया, पैसा कहाँ खर्च किया,

इतनी सी बात पे ही, ठोक पीट देती है |

राम शिरोमणि पाठक"दीपक"
acha likha hai aapne pathak sb. bahut acche
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«Reply #2 on: April 18, 2013, 12:16:25 AM »
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hardik aabhar adarniyaa
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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2013, 12:23:07 AM »
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Pathak saahab ...

bht khoob aur khubsurat post hai aapki

lekin aapne ise galat section me post Kia hai

kyunki aapki kavita hasya aur vyang par aadharit hai islie
mai aapki kavita mazahiya section me shift kar raha

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bahut sunder
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ahcha likha hai saaheb, aage bhi yuNhi apni kalamkaari bikherte rahiye...
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