KHAAR HOTAA.... "MohaN"

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KHAAR HOTAA

Ussey kaun dekh saktaa, ke yagaanaa hai woh yaktaa,
Jo due kee buu bhi hotii to kahin do chaar hotaa!
Yeh masala-e-tasawaf, yeh teraa bayan Ghalib,
Tujhe hum walii samajhte jo naa baadaa khaar hotaa!!
Ghalib

Who can behold him, he is
So singular and so unique
Had there been a shade of duality
Inimitable your style so unique
And your concerns so mystic
You would have been a prophet Ghalib
But for your love for women and wine
A taste subject to critique....

Surindar. N           "MohaN"
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«Reply #1 on: August 25, 2016, 09:24:36 AM »
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Bahot khoob Sir  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Bahot khoob Sir  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Wow......wonderful adaptation
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Wow......wonderful adaptation
bahut shukria Priya Jee.
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KHAAR HOTAA

Ussey kaun dekh saktaa, ke yagaanaa hai woh yaktaa,
Jo due kee buu bhi hotii to kahin do chaar hotaa!
Yeh masala-e-tasawaf, yeh teraa bayan Ghalib,
Tujhe hum walii samajhte jo naa baadaa khaar hotaa!!
Ghalib

Who can behold him, he is
So singular and so unique
Had there been a shade of duality
Inimitable your style so unique
And your concerns so mystic
You would have been a prophet Ghalib
But for your love for women and wine
A taste subject to critique....

Surindar. N           "MohaN"

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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