Ajj neend kaeon nahi aa rahi...

by Arjun_ on February 22, 2009, 05:30:47 PM
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Arjun_
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Ajj neend kaeon nahi rahi
mainu kis sochan geri pa lai
jee peya han ya moh gaya han
eh raat haneri ki darsa rahi

kehdi duniya vich udh chaleyan han
kisse toote shaakh de paate wangu
injh soch vich kiwe doob gaya han
kisse wagde hoye darya wangu

haard gayi eh zindagi meri
kis guman-geri fasa layi
Ajj neend kaeon nahi rahi
mainu kis sochan geri pa lai

ajj neend kaeon nahi ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: February 22, 2009, 05:47:34 PM »
wow kaya baat hai.... bahoot dina baad Punjabi poetry padan nu mili hai...Apko pahle bhi pada tha Arjun ji.. app bahoot acha likhte hai... Good work!!

Mujhe punjabi nahi atti .. phir bhi sath dene ki koshish karne ja rahi hu...

Aa teri ankha ch nind bhar da
banwa da daal ghera,socha teri nu kas da
mithe tere supnya ch, apna her rang bhar da
rawe na tanu koi hosh, ida di khumari ch kar da
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pandit
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«Reply #2 on: February 22, 2009, 05:48:50 PM »
Ajj neend kaeon nahi rahi
mainu kis sochan geri pa lai
jee peya han ya moh gaya han
eh raat haneri ki darsa rahi

kehdi duniya vich udh chaleyan han
kisse toote shaakh de paate wangu
injh soch vich kiwe doob gaya han
kisse wagde hoye darya wangu

haard gayi eh zindagi meri
kis guman-geri fasa layi
Ajj neend kaeon nahi rahi
mainu kis sochan geri pa lai

ajj neend kaeon nahi ...

Nice lines Arjun and pooja jee...
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2009, 08:02:01 PM »
shukaria Pandit ji
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