Saanp

by Prateek Mardia on April 11, 2008, 05:24:43 PM

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Prateek Mardia

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Saanp(snake),tum sabhya to hue nahi,
shehar mein basna bhee tumhe nahi aaya,
ek baat puchu--bataoge?
kahan se sikha dasna...
yeh vish kahan se paaya!
(N/M)


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Pooja

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Re: Saanp

«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2008, 06:24:30 PM »

main hu nagin, yah vish is jahan se he paaya hai
sab se mila mujhko tukaro main, maine ek sans main loutaya hai!!!!


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Saanp

«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2008, 01:56:55 PM »

pooja ji,

adhbut likh gayi he aap.mera salaam sweekar kare.

Prateek


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Pooja

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Re: Saanp

«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2008, 01:59:55 PM »

Shukaria Prateek ji, acha laga jaan kar ki apko pasand ayya!!


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Rajbir

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Re: Saanp

«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2008, 02:05:03 PM »

Prateek

Nice sharing !

@Pooja

Superb reply Applause


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Pooja

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Re: Saanp

«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2008, 02:19:22 PM »

Shukaria Veer ji!!!
Ajj app kaise comments de gaye mere liye tongue3


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Saanp

«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2008, 08:22:35 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2008, 06:24:30 PM

main hu nagin, yah vish is jahan se he paaya hai
sab se mila mujhko tukaro main, maine ek sans main loutaya hai!!!!

jo grehan kiya woh hi loutaya
kyon nahi kuch kar dikhaya
mujhe naaz tha teri kaarigari pur
isilye tha vish ko 'amrit' se milaya

jinhe mili ret,unhone gharonde baanaye hai
jinhe mile tinkey,unhone aashiyan basaaye hai
mili jinhe mitti,unhone deepak jalaaye hai
tere hunar ke jalwe maine vish ko sunaaye hai
aur tu usi ko ub tuk seenay se liptaaye hai!!

Prateek


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Pooja

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Re: Saanp

«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2008, 05:10:53 PM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on May 23, 2008, 08:22:35 PM

mujhe naaz tha teri kaarigari pur
isilye tha vish ko 'amrit' se milaya

Prateek

bahoot khoob Prateek ji!!! bahot hi acha likha hai apne. Khas kar yah do line to lamal ki lagi mujhe!!


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Saanp

«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2008, 05:11:20 PM »

seenay mein jub machalta ho vish
to usey zuban se mut ugalna
'amrit' na bana sako, koi baat nahi
woh swayam seekh lega pighalna

Prateek


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Pooja

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Re: Saanp

«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2008, 05:13:38 PM »

wah kaya baat hai.....bahoot khoob Prateek ji!!


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Saanp

«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2008, 05:36:03 PM »

pooja ji,

aapko accha laga to mujhe sakoon ka anubhav he.
jub se aapne is panne pur aapka pehla jawaab likha tha-mein hairaan thaa,jawaab aapka itna jaandaar tha.
khoj mein laga thaa ki kaise us jawaab se takkar lu-jo sacchai ke itna kareeb thaa,fir bhee der aaya durust aaya.jo kuch soch-soch kar ekatrit kar saka woh likh paaya aage.such maaniyega bahut mehnat lagi he!

Prateek


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Pooja

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Re: Saanp

«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2008, 06:00:53 PM »

Apki mehnat ke agge,
humne bhi sir jhukaya hai
such kahe to apke likhe ka,
jawab abhi tak humne nahi mil paaya hai!!

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kabhi vish to kabhi sayam jeet gaya
issi kash-m-kash main jeevan beet gaya


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Mast_Malang_Munda

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Re: Saanp

«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2008, 10:28:02 AM »

PARTEEK @ Bhot hi umda kiha hai
POOJA @ aap bhi kamm nahi ho


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Pooja

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Re: Saanp

«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2009, 08:06:27 PM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on May 23, 2008, 08:22:35 PM

Mile vish se kuch Amrit to kuch Vish ban gaya
Jis ka jo mukadarr wo mujhse yah sab le gaya
zindagi hu chalti hu waqat aor karm ke sath
jis ne diya jo, wo waisa he mujhse le gaya!!!