vo chhoti si daraaj.. charan..

by lovely_charan on October 13, 2012, 05:40:51 PM
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vo chhoti si daraaj.. kayi raaz chhupe the jisme..
kayi pechkas .. kayi button.. kayi kaaj chhupe the jisme..
us chhoti si daraaj mein .. khazaane kayi mile ..
vo chhoti si daraaj.. mere humraaz chhupe the jisme..

ek mili gudiya ki koti.. ek hare rang ki gudde ki topi..
unki shadi huyi thi pehle.. jab main thi kuch chhoti.. kuch moti..
ek mila baaja .. jo tha aadha.. kisi bandar ki tokri mein.. jo tha raja....
main lagi hansne.. na tha bas mein.. jane kitne saaz chhupe the jisme..

ek mili katori.. chhoti si.. ek thi dholak ..kuch moti si..
maine dekha.. phir harshayi.. aur bhootkaal mein pahunch gayi..
wapas dekha .. us daraaj mein .. ek ghadi padhi thi .. number wali..
in bachpan ki kuch yaadon ka tha ek pitara khula hua..
vo chhoti si daraaj.. bin bole alfaaz chhupe the jisme...

yeh yaadon ka hi khel jo tha.. ki mujhko vo humraaj mila..
man harshaya.. dil ko bhaya.. fir mujhko naya andaaz mila..
maine socha.. kuch likh dala.. kuch aisa ek ehsaas mila..
mujhko bachpan ki yaadon mein jaane kaisa ullas mila..
milne se chhoti si daraaj.. jaane kaisa ullaas mila...
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«Reply #1 on: October 13, 2012, 06:46:09 PM »
good Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 13, 2012, 06:48:24 PM »
waaaaaaaaaah....... bahut sundar ehsaas.....
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lovely_charan
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«Reply #3 on: October 13, 2012, 06:57:06 PM »
good Applause Applause
thanks.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: October 13, 2012, 06:57:30 PM »
waaaaaaaaaah....... bahut sundar ehsaas.....
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thank you vimmi jee
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«Reply #5 on: October 13, 2012, 07:09:19 PM »
Charan Jee Aadaab!


Wel Come ro YO India... :

WaaH waaH waaH waaH... Kia khoob nazm pesh ki hai aapne...
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explanation... Usual Smile

Humari hazaaroN dili daad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 

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«Reply #6 on: October 14, 2012, 12:59:21 AM »
bahut pyaare peshkash mubarak ho
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«Reply #7 on: October 14, 2012, 02:29:00 AM »
bahut khubsurat bahut hi pyara aur gehra qalaam......

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«Reply #8 on: October 14, 2012, 05:50:06 AM »
vo chhoti si daraaj.. kayi raaz chhupe the jisme..
kayi pechkas .. kayi button.. kayi kaaj chhupe the jisme..
us chhoti si daraaj mein .. khazaane kayi mile ..
vo chhoti si daraaj.. mere humraaz chhupe the jisme..

ek mili gudiya ki koti.. ek hare rang ki gudde ki topi..
unki shadi huyi thi pehle.. jab main thi kuch chhoti.. kuch moti..
ek mila baaja .. jo tha aadha.. kisi bandar ki tokri mein.. jo tha raja....
main lagi hansne.. na tha bas mein.. jane kitne saaz chhupe the jisme..

ek mili katori.. chhoti si.. ek thi dholak ..kuch moti si..
maine dekha.. phir harshayi.. aur bhootkaal mein pahunch gayi..
wapas dekha .. us daraaj mein .. ek ghadi padhi thi .. number wali..
in bachpan ki kuch yaadon ka tha ek pitara khula hua..
vo chhoti si daraaj.. bin bole alfaaz chhupe the jisme...

yeh yaadon ka hi khel jo tha.. ki mujhko vo humraaj mila..
man harshaya.. dil ko bhaya.. fir mujhko naya andaaz mila..
maine socha.. kuch likh dala.. kuch aisa ek ehsaas mila..
mujhko bachpan ki yaadon mein jaane kaisa ullas mila..
milne se chhoti si daraaj.. jaane kaisa ullaas mila...
.lovely_charan , bohut khoob, umda, lajwab nazm kahi hai , kya baat hai, padhte padhte apne bachpan me kho gaya. shukriya mujhe mera bachpan yad dilane ke liye. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 14, 2012, 06:18:49 AM »
Bahut Sunder  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 14, 2012, 06:39:41 PM »
shukriya aap sabhi ka.. acha laga ki aap sab ko yeh poem pasand aayi,,, Usual Smile Usual Smile  thank you jee.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: October 16, 2012, 05:38:46 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #12 on: October 16, 2012, 07:03:39 PM »
thank you nand jee.. Usual Smile
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