नए सूरज उगाना चाहता हूँ

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नए सूरज उगाना चाहता हूँ,
रात को दिन बनाना चाहता हूँ.
भेद जो भी हैं  अपने दरमयान,
भेद वो जड़ से मिटाना चाहता हूँ.
नफरतों की बंजर ज़मीन के सीने पे,
खुशियों के फूल खिलाना चाहता हूँ.
मेरी मंजिल दूर हो परवाह नहीं,
मंजिलों को पास लाना चाहता हूँ.
मुश्किलों की हवाएं  कितने भी जोर लगाये,
आंधियों में आशायों के दीप जलाना चाहता हूँ,
रोते हुए बच्चे की ख्वाईश की खातिर,
चाँद को ज़मीन पर लाना चाहता हूँ.
मुश्किलों की पथरीली ज़मी पर,
उम्मीद की नदिया बहाना चाहता हूँ.
जिंदा इंसान जहा जा सके आ सके.
ऐसे स्वर्ग तक सीडी बनाना चाहता हूँ,
जिसके आंचल में जहाँ की खुशियाँ हों,
ऐसी माँ की गोद में सो जाना चाहता हूँ.
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2013, 12:09:47 PM »
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waah waah subhaan allah
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2013, 02:38:15 PM »
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Aap ki soch ko is naacheez ka salaam Saxena jee..
Mere liye to aapki ye chand lines hi bahut ho gayee..
नए सूरज उगाना चाहता हूँ,
रात को दिन बनाना चाहता हूँ.
भेद जो भी हैं  अपने दरमयान,
भेद वो जड़ से मिटाना चाहता हूँ.
kitni khoobsurti se satya ko sweekara hai aapne.. par ek positive approach bhi dikh raha hai..dil ko chooti huee aapki ye rachna..
aapne kamaal ka likha hai...
 
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bahut badiya sir

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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2013, 03:31:30 PM »
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so good

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bahut badiya likha hai aapne....ek ek sher pasand aaya...aise hee likhte rahiye.....
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waah kya bat hai
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waah waah subhaan allah

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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on April 15, 2013, 01:53:25 PM
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Quote from: mkv on April 15, 2013, 02:38:15 PM
Aap ki soch ko is naacheez ka salaam Saxena jee..
Mere liye to aapki ye chand lines hi bahut ho gayee..
नए सूरज उगाना चाहता हूँ,
रात को दिन बनाना चाहता हूँ.
भेद जो भी हैं  अपने दरमयान,
भेद वो जड़ से मिटाना चाहता हूँ.
kitni khoobsurti se satya ko sweekara hai aapne.. par ek positive approach bhi dikh raha hai..dil ko chooti huee aapki ye rachna..
aapne kamaal ka likha hai...
 
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bahut badiya likha hai aapne....ek ek sher pasand aaya...aise hee likhte rahiye.....
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