(:!!!!!!!!!:)

by killbill on November 24, 2010, 06:44:16 PM

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killbill

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aaine me jo dekhi surat,
tasveer uski nazar ayee.
chand lamhon ki mulakato me,
kaisi ye sazaa payee.
khud se hi duur hue ab,
hui mehfil me jaghasaee.
besudh sa hone lage,
khud me hi khone lage,
jaane kaisi ik aas chaee.
hoth budbudate hai,
dil gungunata hai,
par shabd hain ki nikalte nahi.
madhoshi ka aalam hai ab,
hosh ka bhi pata nhi.
har chehre me bas wo hi nazar ayeee..
chand lamhon ki mulakaaton me mene,
jaane kaisi ye saza payee..
aaine me jo dekhi surat,
tasveer uski nazar ayee...


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Re: (:!!!!!!!!!:)

«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2010, 06:58:42 PM »

good 1 subhashji kya aapko bhi mohabbat ho gai keep writting


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Re: (:!!!!!!!!!:)

«Reply #2 on: November 24, 2010, 07:04:21 PM »

yasmeen ji shukriya.
mohabat ho gai h wo bhi 1 sided.
wese me jo man me ata h wai likh deta hu cell me..kbi diary me likhta to kuch dhang ka likh sakta mai bhi:)
thanx Yasmeen


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«Reply #3 on: November 24, 2010, 07:04:48 PM »

yasmeen ji shukriya.
mohabat ho gai h wo bhi 1 sided.
wese me jo man me ata h wai likh deta hu cell me..kbi diary me likhta to kuch dhang ka likh sakta mai bhi:)
thanx Yasmeen


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Re: (:!!!!!!!!!:)

«Reply #4 on: November 24, 2010, 07:37:29 PM »

wahhh wahh KB JI bht khubbbbb


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Re: (:!!!!!!!!!:)

«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2010, 12:48:15 AM »

NICE

Quote from: killbill on November 24, 2010, 06:44:16 PM


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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2010, 03:49:25 AM »

Kasak ji or Manoj ji..aap dono ka behad shukriya jo mera likha hua kalaam padha or upar se Tareef bhi kari:)
bas aise hi hausala dijiye mujhe..tahe dil se sukraguzaar hu aap dono ka


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«Reply #7 on: November 25, 2010, 06:18:12 AM »

ohooo.... ishq vishq... very good subash ji....
lage rahiye....
or jiske liye likhi hai use suna deejiye...
aapki muhbaat 2 sided ho jayegi...
all d best.....