Aab-e-hayaat dhoondhe mujhe...Mamta Bajpai

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Aab-e-hayaat dhoondhe mujhe mai milaa nahee
ik boond pyaas hai meri koi ghilaa naheeN

mujhko to hai azal se teri hee justajoo
tadbeereN laakh keeN magar tu hee milaa naheeN

ashqoN kee baarishoN me dhundhlaa gaye hain khwaab
jo aqs mere dil me thaa wo hee dhulaa naheeN

ab kee dafaa bahaareN kuchh aise aayeeN haiN
raNg-o-shabaab unme zaraa bhee ghulaa naheeN

kaisee chaleeN haiN aaj chaman me ye aaNdhiyaaN
chhaayee naa gard koi bhee pattaa hilaa naheeN

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: December 14, 2011, 04:02:48 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob kahaa hai mamtaa ji mubaarak ho
"Bahut dino se soch rahaa thaa mamtaa ji."
shaakhe-gul par fool aapsaa khilaa naheeN."
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«Reply #2 on: December 14, 2011, 05:18:25 AM »
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waaah mamta di....bahut khoob....mast
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«Reply #3 on: December 14, 2011, 06:13:06 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 14, 2011, 12:45:55 AM
Aab-e-hayaat dhoondhe mujhe mai milaa nahee
ik boond pyaas hai meri koi ghilaa naheeN

mujhko to hai azal se teri hee justajoo
tadbeereN laakh keeN magar tu hee milaa naheeN

ashqoN kee baarishoN me dhundhlaa gaye hain khwaab
jo aqs mere dil me thaa wo hee dhulaa naheeN

ab kee dafaa bahaareN kuchh aise aayeeN haiN
raNg-o-shabaab unme zaraa bhee ghulaa naheeN

kaisee chaleeN haiN aaj chaman me ye aaNdhiyaaN
chhaayee naa gard koi bhee pattaa hilaa naheeN

Mamta Bajpai


bahut hi khoob mamta ji wah..........!
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«Reply #4 on: December 14, 2011, 07:42:24 AM »
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Bahut khoob,Mamta ji.Har she'r laajawab hai.Bahut bahut mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2011, 10:33:51 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 14, 2011, 12:45:55 AM
Aab-e-hayaat dhoondhe mujhe mai milaa nahee
ik boond pyaas hai meri koi ghilaa naheeN

mujhko to hai azal se teri hee justajoo
tadbeereN laakh keeN magar tu hee milaa naheeN  Applause Applause Applause

ashqoN kee baarishoN me dhundhlaa gaye hain khwaab
jo aqs mere dil me thaa wo hee dhulaa naheeN

ab kee dafaa bahaareN kuchh aise aayeeN haiN
raNg-o-shabaab unme zaraa bhee ghulaa naheeN  Applause Applause Applause

kaisee chaleeN haiN aaj chaman me ye aaNdhiyaaN
chhaayee naa gard koi bhee pattaa hilaa naheeN

Mamta Bajpai
Bahut khoob Mamta ji
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2011, 04:07:18 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 14, 2011, 12:45:55 AM
ashqoN kee baarishoN me dhundhlaa gaye hain khwaab
jo aqs mere dil me thaa wo hee dhulaa naheeN
Mamta Bajpai

Wah Wah Wah..
Kya baat hai Mamta jee..
Kayi dino baad apko parra aur bahaut acha laga parrkar..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: December 16, 2011, 03:17:27 PM »
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Shukriyaa Saini saaheb! aap kaa ye andaaz e bayaaN sachmuch bahut khoob hai.....behad shukriya
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«Reply #8 on: December 16, 2011, 03:25:23 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 14, 2011, 12:45:55 AM
Aab-e-hayaat dhoondhe mujhe mai milaa nahee
ik boond pyaas hai meri koi ghilaa naheeN

mujhko to hai azal se teri hee justajoo
tadbeereN laakh keeN magar tu hee milaa naheeN

ashqoN kee baarishoN me dhundhlaa gaye hain khwaab
jo aqs mere dil me thaa wo hee dhulaa naheeN

ab kee dafaa bahaareN kuchh aise aayeeN haiN
raNg-o-shabaab unme zaraa bhee ghulaa naheeN

kaisee chaleeN haiN aaj chaman me ye aaNdhiyaaN
chhaayee naa gard koi bhee pattaa hilaa naheeN

Mamta Bajpai


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: December 16, 2011, 03:27:41 PM »
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Shukriyaa Abhi ! tumko bhee bahut dinoN baad apne thread par dekh kar achchhaa lagaa..........
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«Reply #10 on: December 17, 2011, 02:30:28 PM »
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Gazal ko saraahane or housalaa afzai kaa behad shukriyaa Adil jee!
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«Reply #11 on: December 17, 2011, 03:22:04 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 14, 2011, 12:45:55 AM
Aab-e-hayaat dhoondhe mujhe mai milaa nahee
ik boond pyaas hai meri koi ghilaa naheeN

mujhko to hai azal se teri hee justajoo
tadbeereN laakh keeN magar tu hee milaa naheeN

ashqoN kee baarishoN me dhundhlaa gaye hain khwaab
jo aqs mere dil me thaa wo hee dhulaa naheeN

ab kee dafaa bahaareN kuchh aise aayeeN haiN
raNg-o-shabaab unme zaraa bhee ghulaa naheeN

kaisee chaleeN haiN aaj chaman me ye aaNdhiyaaN
chhaayee naa gard koi bhee pattaa hilaa naheeN

Mamta Bajpai


Waah waah Waah!!!!!

Kya kehne Mamta ji...

Bahut bahut Khooob!!!Har ek A'shaar lajawaab

iss mehfil ko Humesha Aap jaise Shayara Ki Zaroorat Hai..

Aate Raha kariye...Likhte Rahiye Thumbs UP

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«Reply #12 on: December 17, 2011, 03:57:02 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley mamta ji ,,,addaab ,,,kalam se nikla hua har ,,shabd laazwaab hai ,,,,aur apni keemat rakhta hai ,,,bahut bahut hi khubsurat likha hai ,,,,dheron daad kabul karen ,,
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«Reply #13 on: December 17, 2011, 04:45:21 PM »
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bohat khoob mamta ji Applause
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«Reply #14 on: December 17, 2011, 06:23:55 PM »
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"mujhko to hai azal se teri hee justajoo
 tadbeereN laakh keeN magar tu hee milaa naheeN"
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"ab kee dafaa bahaareN kuchh aise aayeeN haiN
 raNg-o-shabaab unme zaraa bhee ghulaa naheeN"
 Applause Applause Applause
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-अरुण मिश्र.
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