Aag hogee dhuaaN jahaaN hogaa.................Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on May 31, 2011, 04:06:29 PM
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Aag hogee dhuaaN jahaaN hogaa
kuchh naa kuchh to huaa wahaaN hogaa

bikharaa bikharaa vajood hai apnaa
khaalee khaalee meraa jahaaN hogaa

ho N bahaareN jawaaN o' tu aaye
kitanaa pyaaraa saa wo samaaN hogaa

aaj naakaamiyoN se yaaree hai
kal teraa meraa aasmaaN  hogaa

jiske sar pe duaa kaa saayaa hai
uskaa dushman koi kahaaN hogaa

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2011, 04:13:27 PM »
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Aag hogee dhuaaN jahaaN hogaa
kuchh naa kuchh to huaa wahaaN hogaa

bikharaa bikharaa vajood hai apnaa
khaalee khaalee meraa jahaaN hogaa

ho N bahaareN jawaaN o' tu aaye
kitanaa pyaaraa saa wo samaaN hogaa

aaj naakaamiyoN se yaaree hai
kal teraa meraa aasmaaN  hogaa

jiske sar pe duaa kaa saayaa hai
uskaa dushman koi kahaaN hogaa

Mamta Bajpai


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Mamta Ji. Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab!!!

bahut bahut Khoooob!!! Bahut Hi Gehre Aur Khoobsurat Jazbaat!!!

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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2011, 04:54:15 PM »
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acha acha bahot acha laga parhkar…
thoda sa 2 step aur aage le jati iss nagme ko to behtar hota mamta ji……
daad ki to aap mohtaaz nahi ye hum jante hain ji…
khus rahiye bas yahi dua hai…
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jai ho Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2011, 05:54:36 PM »
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Mamta Ji,

Nice post..wah..waah..wah..waah
Qalam ko salaam..
Duaaon men yaad rakhiyega...

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


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«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2011, 05:58:50 PM »
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very nice

Aag hogee dhuaaN jahaaN hogaa
kuchh naa kuchh to huaa wahaaN hogaa

bikharaa bikharaa vajood hai apnaa
khaalee khaalee meraa jahaaN hogaa

ho N bahaareN jawaaN o' tu aaye
kitanaa pyaaraa saa wo samaaN hogaa

aaj naakaamiyoN se yaaree hai
kal teraa meraa aasmaaN  hogaa

jiske sar pe duaa kaa saayaa hai
uskaa dushman koi kahaaN hogaa

Mamta Bajpai

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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2011, 08:03:42 PM »
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Wah Wah aur Wah Mamta jee..
Akhri ashaar toh sabse bhari raha..
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Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2011, 11:54:46 PM »
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Shukriyaa Khwaish jee! bas aap sabhee kee saraahanna hee humaaree pranvaau hai.........
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2011, 02:23:39 PM »
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Good work Mamta jee....Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: June 03, 2011, 04:57:39 PM »
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Jee Niraalaa jee! fursat or mood huaa to aap kee ye nek tamanna zaroor pooree karooNgee....bahar kaif itanaa maan or pyaar dene kaa behad shukriyaa......
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«Reply #9 on: June 03, 2011, 05:01:06 PM »
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Satish jee!

Dil badaa kar dene waale alfaazoN kaa behad shukriyaa......jab koi adabshanaas hume saraahataa hai to waaqai dil badaa ho jaataa hai.......shukriyaa .... meharbaanee.....
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«Reply #10 on: July 16, 2011, 12:18:44 PM »
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Aag hogee dhuaaN jahaaN hogaa
kuchh naa kuchh to huaa wahaaN hogaa

bikharaa bikharaa vajood hai apnaa
khaalee khaalee meraa jahaaN hogaa

ho N bahaareN jawaaN o' tu aaye
kitanaa pyaaraa saa wo samaaN hogaa

aaj naakaamiyoN se yaaree hai
kal teraa meraa aasmaaN  hogaa

jiske sar pe duaa kaa saayaa hai
uskaa dushman koi kahaaN hogaa

Mamta Bajpai



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