Aag qaaboo me aa hee jaanee thee...........Mamta Bajpai

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jo bujhaane kee tumne thaanee hai
aag qaaboo me aa hee jaanee hai

kuchh madaavaa ho uljhee saaNsoN kaa
yaa tadapnaa hee zindgaanee hai

kab khayaaloN me baNdisheN dekheeN
ye lahar see hai aanee jaanee hai

saNg zamaane ke chal naheeN sakte
apnee raftaar to puraanee hai

likhne waalaa koi likhe mujh par
jind meri bhee ik kahaanee hai

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: September 18, 2012, 12:25:25 AM »
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Bahut khoob Mamta jee
acchi ghazal hai..matla khoob bhaaya mujhe..vaise sabhi ashaar khoob hai..
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«Reply #2 on: September 18, 2012, 12:51:43 AM »
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Hont julfay deakh tayre har ada
aaj gajlo may rawani ho gae.

Pasand aey to kud ko dad di ji a ga.
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«Reply #3 on: September 18, 2012, 02:57:52 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on September 17, 2012, 10:34:08 PM
jo bujhaane kee tumne thaanee hai
aag qaaboo me aa hee jaanee hai

kuchh madaavaa ho uljhee saaNsoN kaa
yaa tadapnaa hee zindgaanee hai

kab khayaaloN me baNdisheN dekheeN
ye lahar see hai aanee jaanee hai

saNg zamaane ke chal naheeN sakte
apnee raftaar to puraanee hai

likhne waalaa koi likhe mujh par
jind meri bhee ik kahaanee hai

Mamta Bajpai
bohut khoob mamta jee , umda ghazal hai , har shair ghazal ka shair hai, aur matala to bohut hi lajwab hai, bohut din ke baad mukammal ghazal padhi hai yoindia par , dherooon daad qubool kijiye...
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«Reply #4 on: September 18, 2012, 03:21:45 AM »
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Bahut vadhiya likhiya hai...
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«Reply #5 on: September 18, 2012, 03:26:16 AM »
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bohut khub mamta ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 18, 2012, 03:33:49 AM »
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bahut hee shaandaar aur laajawaab peshkash mamta ji dheron daad aur shubh kaamnaayen
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«Reply #7 on: September 18, 2012, 04:09:59 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob mamta ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: September 18, 2012, 04:14:10 AM »
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Bahut hee khubsurat aur umda gazal mamta ji....... Dhero daad aur mubarakbad
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«Reply #9 on: September 18, 2012, 05:21:21 AM »
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v nice...
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«Reply #10 on: September 18, 2012, 05:52:28 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on September 17, 2012, 10:34:08 PM
jo bujhaane kee tumne thaanee hai
aag qaaboo me aa hee jaanee hai

kuchh madaavaa ho uljhee saaNsoN kaa
yaa tadapnaa hee zindgaanee hai

kab khayaaloN me baNdisheN dekheeN
ye lahar see hai aanee jaanee hai

saNg zamaane ke chal naheeN sakte
apnee raftaar to puraanee hai

likhne waalaa koi likhe mujh par
jind meri bhee ik kahaanee hai

Mamta Bajpai


naaaaaaaaaaaaaice---------M.B Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: September 18, 2012, 07:23:47 AM »
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 Applause
 bahut khoob.
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«Reply #12 on: September 18, 2012, 04:13:49 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Mamta jee. Kaafi achha laga padh ke.
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«Reply #13 on: September 18, 2012, 04:18:40 PM »
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waah ! bahaut khoob mamta ji ! har sher qaabil e daad hai !
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«Reply #14 on: September 19, 2012, 08:12:38 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on September 17, 2012, 10:34:08 PM
jo bujhaane kee tumne thaanee hai
aag qaaboo me aa hee jaanee hai
mehnat aur khudetmaadi hamesha kaamyaabi ki raah dikhati hai Applause Applause Applause
kuchh madaavaa ho uljhee saaNsoN kaa
yaa tadapnaa hee zindgaanee hai
kisi kisi ki zindagi uljhan.o mein hi khatm ho jaati hai icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
kab khayaaloN me baNdisheN dekheeN
ye lahar see hai aanee jaanee hai
haan sahi hai. halaat ke hisaab se khyalaat badal jaate hain. nazariya badal jata hai Applause Applause Applause
saNg zamaane ke chal naheeN sakte
apnee raftaar to puraanee hai
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
likhne waalaa koi likhe mujh par
jind meri bhee ik kahaanee hai
bahut khoob..! Applause Applause Applause
Mamta Bajpai

bahut khoob mamta ji...!
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