aage koi aasmaan nikle.........

by SURESH SANGWAN on October 30, 2011, 11:48:59 AM
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Ek muddat se tamanna thi ke koi humsa nikle.
Fir usse koi mohabbat ka silsila nikle.

Yun armaan mere usko dekhkar nikle.
Jaise patthar ka seena cheerkar jharna nikle.

Gujaarni hi padi saanse patjhadon ke beech.
Jo tu hi nahin tha to jaan-e-bahaar kya nikle.

Khayal hi aaya nahin hume bekhudi mein apna.
JO chahte the tumhe to khud pe pyar kya nikle.

Wo rishta jud gaya tumse khushi aur gham ka.
bahut meethe mohabbat -e-chaman ke fal nikle.

Bahut mumkin hai taare toot jayen.
Tum sa pyara jo koi humdam nikle.

Tum to ghabra jaate ho phoolon ki khushboo se.
Kya hoga gar tumhare paas se chaman nikle.

Har kadam par badh jaati hain gehraiyan.
Kaash ke aage koi aasmaaan nikle.
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«Reply #1 on: October 30, 2011, 02:49:08 PM »
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Suresh ji,
Wah! Bahut sundar. Khas taur se ye sher.

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 30, 2011, 11:48:59 AM

Wo rishta jud gaya tumse khushi aur gham ka.
bahut meethe mohabbat -e-chaman ke fal nikle.

Daad kubul kijiye.
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2011, 02:54:20 PM »
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USHA JI PASAND FARMAANE KA BAHUT 2 SHUKRIYA.
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aap to chha gai hain jab se yo par aai hain. bahut achha laga.
Quote from: usha rajesh on October 30, 2011, 02:49:08 PM
Suresh ji,
Wah! Bahut sundar. Khas taur se ye sher.
Daad kubul kijiye.
 Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2011, 03:00:11 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 30, 2011, 02:54:20 PM
USHA JI PASAND FARMAANE KA BAHUT 2 SHUKRIYA.
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aap to chha gai hain jab se yo par aai hain. bahut achha laga.


Suresh ji, bas aap sabhi kadradano aur shubhchintako ka pyar aur ashirwad hai. notworthy
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2011, 03:08:45 PM »
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suresh ji bahut khoob
specially
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 30, 2011, 11:48:59 AM
Ek muddat se tamanna thi ke koi humsa nikle.
Fir usse koi mohabbat ka silsila nikle.

Yun armaan mere usko dekhkar nikle.
Jaise patthar ka seena cheerkar jharna nikle. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Gujaarni hi padi saanse patjhadon ke beech.
Jo tu hi nahin tha to jaan-e-bahaar kya nikle.

Khayal hi aaya nahin hume bekhudi mein apna.
JO chahte the tumhe to khud pe pyar kya nikle. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Wo rishta jud gaya tumse khushi aur gham ka.
bahut meethe mohabbat -e-chaman ke fal nikle.

Bahut mumkin hai taare toot jayen.
Tum sa pyara jo koi humdam nikle. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tum to ghabra jaate ho phoolon ki khushboo se.
Kya hoga gar tumhare paas se chaman nikle.

Har kadam par badh jaati hain gehraiyan.
Kaash ke aage koi aasmaaan nikle. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2011, 03:12:30 PM »
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BAHUT SARA SHUKRIYA PARINDE JI.
YUN HI HAUSLA AFZAHI KARTE RAHEN.
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suresh ji bahut khoob
specially
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2011, 03:59:33 AM »
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bahut sundar sureshji
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2011, 08:29:01 AM »
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bahut hi nayab likha hai ....daad hajir hai ,,,likhna jaari rakhiye
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 30, 2011, 11:48:59 AM
Ek muddat se tamanna thi ke koi humsa nikle.
Fir usse koi mohabbat ka silsila nikle.

Yun armaan mere usko dekhkar nikle.
Jaise patthar ka seena cheerkar jharna nikle.

Gujaarni hi padi saanse patjhadon ke beech.
Jo tu hi nahin tha to jaan-e-bahaar kya nikle.

Khayal hi aaya nahin hume bekhudi mein apna.
JO chahte the tumhe to khud pe pyar kya nikle.

Wo rishta jud gaya tumse khushi aur gham ka.
bahut meethe mohabbat -e-chaman ke fal nikle.

Bahut mumkin hai taare toot jayen.
Tum sa pyara jo koi humdam nikle.

Tum to ghabra jaate ho phoolon ki khushboo se.
Kya hoga gar tumhare paas se chaman nikle.

Har kadam par badh jaati hain gehraiyan.
Kaash ke aage koi aasmaaan nikle.
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2011, 08:33:13 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Suresh Ji

Wah Wah Khoob Likha HAi aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: October 31, 2011, 09:43:51 AM »
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bahut 2 shukriya mann ji.
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bahut sundar sureshji
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«Reply #10 on: October 31, 2011, 09:44:55 AM »
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shukriya kubool kijiye.daad kubool hai sunil ji. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Quote from: sunildehgawani on October 31, 2011, 08:29:01 AM
bahut hi nayab likha hai ....daad hajir hai ,,,likhna jaari rakhiye
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«Reply #11 on: October 31, 2011, 09:45:34 AM »
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bahut sara shukriya sanjeev ji.
hausla afzahi karte rahen.
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Bahut Khoob Suresh Ji

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