AAH...(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on February 13, 2011, 08:09:40 PM
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                         uljhano se uljahta rahaa zindagi bhar..!
                         haseen shaam ko tarastaa rahaa zindagi bhar..!!

                         phaili thi ek khusbu fizaa mein uski aamad pe,
                         talaash mein uski bhatktaa rahaa zindagi bhar,

                         giraa jo khud ki nazar se  uss roz main,
                         gir-gir ke phir sambhaltaa rahaa zindagi bhar,

                         nashaa siyaasat ka chaayaa kuch iss tarah mujh pe,
                         lafzo ko apne badaltaa rahaa zindagi bhar,

                         'khamosh'si ek aah thi ashqoan mein uske....!
                          jaltaa rahaa uss aah mein zindagi bhar...!!

                        
                        
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nirala
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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2011, 02:19:50 AM »
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good
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«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2011, 03:07:28 AM »
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                         uljhano se uljahta rahaa zindagi bhar..!
                         haseen shaam ko tarastaa rahaa zindagi bhar..!!

                         phaili thi ek khusbu fizaa mein uski aamad pe,
                         talaash mein uski bhatktaa rahaa zindagi bhar,

                         giraa jo khud ki nazar se  uss roz main,
                         gir-gir ke phir sambhaltaa rahaa zindagi bhar,

                         nashaa siyaasat ka chaayaa kuch iss tarah mujh pe,
                         lafzo ko apne badaltaa rahaa zindagi bhar,

                         'khamosh'si ek aah thi ashqoan mein uske....!
                          uss aah mein jaltaa rahaa zindagi bhar...!!

Very Impressive ... Very Touching ... Khaamosh Ji !

Very Nice Creation ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2011, 05:49:11 AM »
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lajawab hai khamoshji... kya baat hai.... dil tak....

 Applause Applause Applause
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2011, 12:49:31 PM »
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thanx
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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2011, 12:50:12 PM »
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Kya Baat Hai Bahut Khub Khamosh Ji
Dad...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

thanx shihab sb
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2011, 08:55:15 PM »
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Bahut Khub Khamosh JI
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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2011, 12:30:37 PM »
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lajawab hai khamoshji... kya baat hai.... dil tak....

 Applause Applause Applause

thanx manjum ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2012, 08:34:05 AM »
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Very Impressive ... Very Touching ... Khaamosh Ji !

Very Nice Creation ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !

thanx
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