Aaine ne jo chehra dikhaya .....by Premdeep

by premdeep on February 14, 2014, 08:45:06 PM
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Aaine ne jo chehra dikhaya hai
Ajnabi sa  aks nazar aya  hai

Jahan se chala tha wahin aa gaya
Kismat ne pahiya jo ghumaya hai

Khush tha jin apno ko paakar
Unhi ne sabse jyada rulaya hai

pyaar ki kismat seeshe si hai
Jab jisne chaha tod aaya hai

Jameen meri aankh bhar paani
Baadlon ne phir lalchaya hai

Jubaan par taale pade hain
kya karen wo to paraya hai

Kyun halchal hai sitaron mein
Kya chaand jameen par utar aya hai

Sabd ab thokar se lage hain
Mausaki ne raat bhar jagaya hai

Ghutan si hai  aaj mahaul mein
Usne phir mere khaton ko jalaya hai

Meri aankhen ab jo band hoti hain
Maa ka aanchal saamne lehraya hai
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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2014, 09:36:45 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2014, 12:07:10 AM »
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wha wha kay baat hai
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«Reply #3 on: February 15, 2014, 01:00:16 AM »
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waah waah bahut hi badiya Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: February 15, 2014, 02:48:42 AM »
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That's great.
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2014, 02:49:23 AM »
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Aaine ne jo chehra dikhaya hai
Ajnabi sa  aks nazar aya  hai

Jahan se chala tha wahin aa gaya
Kismat ne pahiya jo ghumaya hai

Khush tha jin apno ko paakar
Unhi ne sabse jyada rulaya hai

pyaar ki kismat seeshe si hai
Jab jisne chaha tod aaya hai

Jameen meri aankh bhar paani
Baadlon ne phir lalchaya hai

Jubaan par taale pade hain
kya karen wo to paraya hai

Kyun halchal hai sitaron mein
Kya chaand jameen par utar aya hai

Sabd ab thokar se lage hain
Mausaki ne raat bhar jagaya hai

Ghutan si hai  aaj mahaul mein
Usne phir mere khaton ko jalaya hai

Meri aankhen ab jo band hoti hain
Maa ka aanchal saamne lehraya hai


acha likha hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2014, 09:55:19 AM »
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bahut khoob....... Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2014, 12:10:45 PM »
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 Applause  Applause bahut umda !
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2014, 05:09:56 PM »
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waaaaaah waaaaaaaaaah bahut bahut khooooooob.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #9 on: February 17, 2014, 04:26:15 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: March 05, 2014, 02:06:26 PM »
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Khush tha jin apno ko paakar
Unhi ne sabse jyada rulaya hai

pyaar ki kismat seeshe si hai
Jab jisne chaha tod aaya hai

Jameen meri aankh bhar paani
Baadlon ne phir lalchaya hai

Jubaan par taale pade hain
kya karen wo to paraya hai

Kyun halchal hai sitaron mein
Kya chaand jameen par utar aya hai

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bahut khoooooob premdeep ji

Rau due hai.............
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