<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 08, 2011, 09:57:45 AM
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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<>

Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai
Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai

Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai
Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai

Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main
Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai

Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me
Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai

Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere
Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai

Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*
Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!

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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2011, 10:25:03 AM »
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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<>

Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai
Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai

Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai
Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai

Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main
Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai

Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me
Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai

Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere
Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai

Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*
Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!


Justttttt Excellent!!!!!!

Anu Jab Aap Aisa Likhte Ho, Padhne Ka Maza  Hi Kuch Aur Hota Hai!!!

Kahin Koi Kami-Peshi Nahi..

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob!!!

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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2011, 10:29:36 AM »
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!


Behad gehre aur khoob ahsaas piroye hai aapne..
kafi achchi kalaam kahi hai .. sabhi ashaar khoob
rahe tah e dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye.
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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<>

Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai
Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai

Bahut khoob achcha matla kaha hai daad..

Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai
Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai

Ahsaas khub kaha hai jee daad ..
Khuda Na kare aapke liye kisi ke dil meiN nafrat aaye..


Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main
Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai

Bahut khoob achcha sher kaha daad...

Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me
Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai

IS sher ki dono line meiN hume rabta nazar
nahi aa raha hai.. lagta hai kuch kami hai .. Huh?
Shayad humari kam akhli ho...


Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere
Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai

Waah waah kia khoob sher kaha daad.. Bahut khoob

Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*
Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!

Huh? Huh? Huh? Huh?  Achcha hai daad..  

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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2011, 11:40:18 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah..
Bahaut hi acha likha hai apne..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2011, 12:34:20 PM »
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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<>

Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai
Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai

Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai
Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai

Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main
Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai


BAHUT KHOOB SHER HAI


Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me
Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai

Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere
Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai

Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*
Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!


acha laga.......!
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2011, 02:35:02 PM »
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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<>

Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai
Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai

Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai
Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai

Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main
Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai

Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me
Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai

Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere
Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai

Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak*
Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!


Kasak ji,

bahut badhiya.
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«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2011, 07:17:52 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: October 09, 2011, 11:58:42 AM »
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khwaish ji.......... aapki tareef mili to laga wakai khubsurat likha haihumne... yunhi sathh rahiyega hamesha..behad shukriya aapka jo pasand kiya aapne kalam ko
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«Reply #8 on: October 09, 2011, 12:00:46 PM »
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parwazzz jiiiiii........ aapne aaj pm kar hi diya aakhir meri kisi post ka... taras gai thi k kabhi iss layak likhun k aap iss tarah har sher ko padhen........ behad shukriya aapka jo aapne apna keemti waqt diya meri kalam ko aur itni achchi se ise samjha aur jana...... jo sher me aapko kami lagi wo mujhe bhi khatki par uska kuch solution samjh nahin aaya to maien rehne dya.... aapko samjh aaye to bataiyega.....
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«Reply #9 on: October 09, 2011, 12:02:31 PM »
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shihab bhai... aap to yunkho gaye ho k dhundhe se nahin milte.... yakeen maniye bht miss kiya aapko......
aapko kalam pasand aai iske liye to main khudko lucky manti hun.... bas dua kijiye yunhi mera likha aapko pasand aata rahe ... yunhi sath rahiyega hamesha bhai.....
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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2011, 12:03:24 PM »
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rahim bhai ..thnx alot ji... kai dino baad kuch likha hai aapko pasand aaya iske liye shukraguzar hun.. yunhi sath dijiyega
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«Reply #11 on: October 09, 2011, 12:04:25 PM »
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sheba ji usha ji aur gyan prakash ji.. bht bht shukriya aap sabka jo aapne apna keemti waqt meri is post ko diya aur pasand kiya aur saraha ..yunhi sath rahiyega hamesha...
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«Reply #12 on: October 10, 2011, 11:11:39 AM »
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buhat khoobsurat ehsaas poori ghazal men kaaim rehtay he... buhat khoob.....
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«Reply #13 on: October 10, 2011, 11:20:38 AM »
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«Reply #14 on: October 10, 2011, 11:23:38 AM »
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