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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<> Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai
Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai
Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai
Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai
Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai
Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak* Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2011, 10:25:03 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2011, 11:40:18 AM » |
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Wah Wah Wah.. Bahaut hi acha likha hai apne.. Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2011, 12:34:20 PM » |
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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<> Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai
Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai
Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai
BAHUT KHOOB SHER HAI
Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai
Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai
Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak* Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!
acha laga.......!
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2011, 02:35:02 PM » |
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<>*Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai*<> Aaj badla badla sa ye ghar lagta hai Anjana sa apna hi shahar lagta hai
Har nazar me apne liye nafrat hai Badla hua sa har manzar lagta hai
Khudse hi chhupti fir rahi hun main Aaine se nazar milate dar lagta hai
Kho n jaun kahin in mast baharon me Bada tanha ye sukha shajar lagta hai
Khilone ki tarha khela hai dil se mere Bhar gaya ab uska dil-jigar lagta hai
Khun se range hain tere hath *kasak* Aayega kahin fir se kahar lagta hai…!!!
Kasak ji,
bahut badhiya.
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«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2011, 07:17:52 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: October 09, 2011, 11:58:42 AM » |
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khwaish ji.......... aapki tareef mili to laga wakai khubsurat likha haihumne... yunhi sathh rahiyega hamesha..behad shukriya aapka jo pasand kiya aapne kalam ko
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«Reply #8 on: October 09, 2011, 12:00:46 PM » |
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parwazzz jiiiiii........ aapne aaj pm kar hi diya aakhir meri kisi post ka... taras gai thi k kabhi iss layak likhun k aap iss tarah har sher ko padhen........ behad shukriya aapka jo aapne apna keemti waqt diya meri kalam ko aur itni achchi se ise samjha aur jana...... jo sher me aapko kami lagi wo mujhe bhi khatki par uska kuch solution samjh nahin aaya to maien rehne dya.... aapko samjh aaye to bataiyega.....
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«Reply #9 on: October 09, 2011, 12:02:31 PM » |
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shihab bhai... aap to yunkho gaye ho k dhundhe se nahin milte.... yakeen maniye bht miss kiya aapko...... aapko kalam pasand aai iske liye to main khudko lucky manti hun.... bas dua kijiye yunhi mera likha aapko pasand aata rahe ... yunhi sath rahiyega hamesha bhai.....
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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2011, 12:03:24 PM » |
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rahim bhai ..thnx alot ji... kai dino baad kuch likha hai aapko pasand aaya iske liye shukraguzar hun.. yunhi sath dijiyega
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«Reply #11 on: October 09, 2011, 12:04:25 PM » |
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sheba ji usha ji aur gyan prakash ji.. bht bht shukriya aap sabka jo aapne apna keemti waqt meri is post ko diya aur pasand kiya aur saraha ..yunhi sath rahiyega hamesha...
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«Reply #12 on: October 10, 2011, 11:11:39 AM » |
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buhat khoobsurat ehsaas poori ghazal men kaaim rehtay he... buhat khoob.....
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«Reply #14 on: October 10, 2011, 11:23:38 AM » |
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