Aaj bohat door jaane ko.....

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"Aaj bohat door jaane ko man kar raha hai,
 is duniya se kinara karne ko man kar raha hai,
 na hon teri yadein jahan,na ho tera astitva jahan,
 na ho tere pyar ki koi bhi nishani jahan,
 chahti hoon main aaj jaana wahan,
 kya hai aisi koi jagah is duniya me?Huh?
 pyar se mehekti wo hawayein na hon jisme,
 jahan main reh sakoon bilkul akeli,
 na hon wahan pyar ke woh mehel,haweli,
 toot ke bikharta hai har pyar karne wala yahan,
 basti na ho jahan pe pyar ki nagri,
 main jee lungi akele,main reh lungi akele,
 bas dikhein na mujhe teri bewafai ke ujele,
 mujhe dhakela thha andhiyare me jisne,
 haan,wahi pyar,thha jispe mujhe itna aetbaar,
 pyar aur khushiyon ki jagah khole jisne,
 dukh,dard aur tanhaiyon ke dwaar,
 main jaana chahti hoon aaj wahan,
 pyar shabd na jaanta ho koi jahan."
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2005, 09:21:08 AM »
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main jaana chahti hoon aaj wahan,
pyar shabd na jaanta ho koi jahan

Excellent wordings Nidhi................
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2005, 09:23:59 AM »
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main jaana chahti hoon aaj wahan,
pyar shabd na jaanta ho koi jahan

Excellent wordings Nidhi................
Thanx Dhadkan. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2005, 09:26:36 AM »
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"Aaj bohat door jaane ko man kar raha hai,
 is duniya se kinara karne ko man kar raha hai,
 na hon teri yadein jahan,na ho tera astitva jahan,
 na ho tere pyar ki koi bhi nishani jahan,
 chahti hoon main aaj jaana wahan,
 kya hai aisi koi jagah is duniya me?Huh?
 pyar se mehekti wo hawayein na hon jisme,
 jahan main reh sakoon bilkul akeli,
 na hon wahan pyar ke woh mehel,haweli,
 toot ke bikharta hai har pyar karne wala yahan,
 basti na ho jahan pe pyar ki nagri,
 main jee lungi akele,main reh lungi akele,
 bas dikhein na mujhe teri bewafai ke ujele,
 mujhe dhakela thha andhiyare me jisne,
 haan,wahi pyar,thha jispe mujhe itna aetbaar,
 pyar aur khushiyon ki jagah khole jisne,
 dukh,dard aur tanhaiyon ke dwaar,
 main jaana chahti hoon aaj wahan,
 pyar shabd na jaanta ho koi jahan."


bahoot hi khoob likha hai Nidhi ji ......
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2005, 09:28:05 AM »
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"Aaj bohat door jaane ko man kar raha hai,
 is duniya se kinara karne ko man kar raha hai,
 na hon teri yadein jahan,na ho tera astitva jahan,
 na ho tere pyar ki koi bhi nishani jahan,
 chahti hoon main aaj jaana wahan,
 kya hai aisi koi jagah is duniya me?Huh?
 pyar se mehekti wo hawayein na hon jisme,
 jahan main reh sakoon bilkul akeli,
 na hon wahan pyar ke woh mehel,haweli,
 toot ke bikharta hai har pyar karne wala yahan,
 basti na ho jahan pe pyar ki nagri,
 main jee lungi akele,main reh lungi akele,
 bas dikhein na mujhe teri bewafai ke ujele,
 mujhe dhakela thha andhiyare me jisne,
 haan,wahi pyar,thha jispe mujhe itna aetbaar,
 pyar aur khushiyon ki jagah khole jisne,
 dukh,dard aur tanhaiyon ke dwaar,
 main jaana chahti hoon aaj wahan,
 pyar shabd na jaanta ho koi jahan."


bahoot hi khoob likha hai Nidhi ji ......
Thankyou Humtum.
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2005, 09:51:05 AM »
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Its really very beaytiful Nidhi............. and heart touching !!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2005, 11:32:15 AM »
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Its really very beaytiful Nidhi............. and heart touching !!!
Thanx Talat Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2005, 11:56:24 AM »
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"Aaj bohat door jaane ko man kar raha hai,
 is duniya se kinara karne ko man kar raha hai,
 na hon teri yadein jahan,na ho tera astitva jahan,
 na ho tere pyar ki koi bhi nishani jahan,
 chahti hoon main aaj jaana wahan,
 kya hai aisi koi jagah is duniya me?Huh?
 pyar se mehekti wo hawayein na hon jisme,
 jahan main reh sakoon bilkul akeli,
 na hon wahan pyar ke woh mehel,haweli,
 toot ke bikharta hai har pyar karne wala yahan,
 basti na ho jahan pe pyar ki nagri,
 main jee lungi akele,main reh lungi akele,
 bas dikhein na mujhe teri bewafai ke ujele,
 mujhe dhakela thha andhiyare me jisne,
 haan,wahi pyar,thha jispe mujhe itna aetbaar,
 pyar aur khushiyon ki jagah khole jisne,
 dukh,dard aur tanhaiyon ke dwaar,
 main jaana chahti hoon aaj wahan,
 pyar shabd na jaanta ho koi jahan."


first 2 lines aur last 2 lines bohot bohot ache hai!!!!!!!!!!

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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2005, 12:17:19 PM »
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"Aaj bohat door jaane ko man kar raha hai,
 is duniya se kinara karne ko man kar raha hai,
 na hon teri yadein jahan,na ho tera astitva jahan,
 na ho tere pyar ki koi bhi nishani jahan,
 chahti hoon main aaj jaana wahan,
 kya hai aisi koi jagah is duniya me?Huh?
 pyar se mehekti wo hawayein na hon jisme,
 jahan main reh sakoon bilkul akeli,
 na hon wahan pyar ke woh mehel,haweli,
 toot ke bikharta hai har pyar karne wala yahan,
 basti na ho jahan pe pyar ki nagri,
 main jee lungi akele,main reh lungi akele,
 bas dikhein na mujhe teri bewafai ke ujele,
 mujhe dhakela thha andhiyare me jisne,
 haan,wahi pyar,thha jispe mujhe itna aetbaar,
 pyar aur khushiyon ki jagah khole jisne,
 dukh,dard aur tanhaiyon ke dwaar,
 main jaana chahti hoon aaj wahan,
 pyar shabd na jaanta ho koi jahan."


first 2 lines aur last 2 lines bohot bohot ache hai!!!!!!!!!!

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lol........Thank u meena.
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2005, 08:50:04 PM »
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mind blowing.................................Swett NIDHI





jab naa se milti hai naa to usey kehte hai inkar
jab haan se milti hai haan to usey kehte hai ikraar
aur jisse ho jaye pyar usey kehte hai dildaar.
jisey nahin hai pyar woh tu hai hi bekar
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2005, 05:02:12 AM »
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mind blowing.................................Swett NIDHI





jab naa se milti hai naa to usey kehte hai inkar
jab haan se milti hai haan to usey kehte hai ikraar
aur jisse ho jaye pyar usey kehte hai dildaar.
jisey nahin hai pyar woh tu hai hi bekar
Thank naveed Usual Smile bohat acchi aur sahi lines likhin :lol:
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«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2005, 09:12:19 AM »
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excellent work nidhi!!! sooo heartfelt n true! loved each n every line! keep it up girl!
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«Reply #12 on: May 06, 2005, 09:17:49 AM »
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excellent work nidhi!!! sooo heartfelt n true! loved each n every line! keep it up girl!
Thank you sooooo much sanya Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: May 06, 2005, 05:05:32 PM »
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"Aaj bohat door jaane ko man kar raha hai,
 is duniya se kinara karne ko man kar raha hai,
 na hon teri yadein jahan,na ho tera astitva jahan,
 na ho tere pyar ki koi bhi nishani jahan,
 chahti hoon main aaj jaana wahan,
 kya hai aisi koi jagah is duniya me?Huh?
 pyar se mehekti wo hawayein na hon jisme,
 jahan main reh sakoon bilkul akeli,
 na hon wahan pyar ke woh mehel,haweli,
 toot ke bikharta hai har pyar karne wala yahan,
 basti na ho jahan pe pyar ki nagri,
 main jee lungi akele,main reh lungi akele,
 bas dikhein na mujhe teri bewafai ke ujele,
 mujhe dhakela thha andhiyare me jisne,
 haan,wahi pyar,thha jispe mujhe itna aetbaar,
 pyar aur khushiyon ki jagah khole jisne,
 dukh,dard aur tanhaiyon ke dwaar,
 main jaana chahti hoon aaj wahan,
 pyar shabd na jaanta ho koi jahan."


wow  superbbbbbbbbbbbbb  nidhi.............bahot  khoob  dost........... tongue3  tongue3  tongue3
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«Reply #14 on: May 06, 2005, 05:19:52 PM »
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"Aaj bohat door jaane ko man kar raha hai,
 is duniya se kinara karne ko man kar raha hai,
 na hon teri yadein jahan,na ho tera astitva jahan,
 na ho tere pyar ki koi bhi nishani jahan,
 chahti hoon main aaj jaana wahan,
 kya hai aisi koi jagah is duniya me?Huh?
 pyar se mehekti wo hawayein na hon jisme,
 jahan main reh sakoon bilkul akeli,
 na hon wahan pyar ke woh mehel,haweli,
 toot ke bikharta hai har pyar karne wala yahan,
 basti na ho jahan pe pyar ki nagri,
 main jee lungi akele,main reh lungi akele,
 bas dikhein na mujhe teri bewafai ke ujele,
 mujhe dhakela thha andhiyare me jisne,
 haan,wahi pyar,thha jispe mujhe itna aetbaar,
 pyar aur khushiyon ki jagah khole jisne,
 dukh,dard aur tanhaiyon ke dwaar,
 main jaana chahti hoon aaj wahan,
 pyar shabd na jaanta ho koi jahan."


wow  superbbbbbbbbbbbbb  nidhi.............bahot  khoob  dost........... tongue3  tongue3  tongue3
Thanx dost Winking
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