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<>*Aaj fir ek bar*<>
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Likhne baithi hun kuch
Aur kuch soch rahi hun
Kalam hai meri khoi aur
Main bhi kahin guum hun
Padh kar teri tehreer ae sanam
Kuch hua hai mere dil me
Tere khamosh dard se shayad
Main bhi kuch gumsum hui hun
Lao aaj fir ek bar main bhi apni
Khoi hui kalam dhundhti hun
Khoye shabdon ko chun chun k
Khyalon se baahar laati hun
Aaj chalo fir ek bar main
Kuch naye geet likhti hun
Aaj fir indradhanushi rang
Shabdon se main sajati hun...!!! |
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2011, 12:08:47 PM » |
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<>*Aaj fir ek bar*<>
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Likhne baithi hun kuch
Aur kuch soch rahi hun
Kalam hai meri khoi aur
Main bhi kahin guum hun
Padh kar teri tehreer ae sanam
Kuch hua hai mere dil me
Tere khamosh dard se shayad
Main bhi kuch gumsum hui hun
Lao aaj fir ek bar main bhi apni
Khoi hui kalam dhundhti hun
Khoye shabdon ko chun chun k
Khyalon se baahar laati hun
Aaj chalo fir ek bar main
Kuch naye geet likhti hun
Aaj fir indradhanushi rang
Shabdon se main sajati hun...!!! very nice ji |
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2011, 12:12:40 PM » |
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Bahaut khoob..
Har shayar ka kahin na kahin aisa haal hota hoga..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2011, 01:22:22 PM » |
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haha udhedbun wali poetry kari iss baar.
mast hai ji mast.
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khud me hi khoya hun aaj
khuch uljha to kuch suljha
kabhi khab kabhi haqeeqat
kabhi rangeen baharon ka guchha
beth kar sochun likh daalun kuch
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achha hai re Kasakk--
sukriya
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2011, 02:16:27 PM » |
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2011, 05:10:28 PM » |
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mastam mast reply koyu....bht hi pyara likha hai tumne...yunhi likhte raho.....love u re
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«Reply #7 on: February 07, 2011, 04:52:58 AM » |
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uffffffffffffff......Hay re…………………..so sweet and touching words
anamika ji……………………aap fir likh rahi he its
really good ji…………..likha aur bahot
bahot likho……….apko padne se behtar kaam
aur kuch nahi ……………lijiye kuch lines meri
taraf se for only u and ur ability…..Apni kalam se ye mahki hawaye likh de
Tu chahe to lafjo me apni wafaye likh de
Tuje chu kar Aaj kalam fir he muskarayi
Tu chahe to zindagi ki nayi dishaye likh de
Ishq like de dard likh de
Tu rasm-e-ulaft ki sadaaye likh de
Har rang he basta he teri kalam me
Raat-oo ko kare roshan tu wo shamaaye likh de
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«Reply #8 on: February 07, 2011, 05:32:08 AM » |
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oye hoye K mam mast mast sunder sunder likha  maza aa gaya ji bahut khub Matrix yaara aapka reply bhi mast hai ji. " thanx " |
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«Reply #9 on: February 07, 2011, 06:54:45 AM » |
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good one anu ji..
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«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2011, 11:52:33 AM » |
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Nice Creation Anamika JI
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«Reply #11 on: February 07, 2011, 04:21:53 PM » |
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mast reply MG.....Lagta hai ek dam dil se nikle alfaaz hain.......  uffffffffffffff......Hay re…………………..so sweet and touching words
anamika ji……………………aap fir likh rahi he its
really good ji…………..likha aur bahot
bahot likho……….apko padne se behtar kaam
aur kuch nahi ……………lijiye kuch lines meri
taraf se for only u and ur ability…..Apni kalam se ye mahki hawaye likh de
Tu chahe to lafjo me apni wafaye likh de
Tuje chu kar Aaj kalam fir he muskarayi
Tu chahe to zindagi ki nayi dishaye likh de
Ishq like de dard likh de
Tu rasm-e-ulaft ki sadaaye likh de
Har rang he basta he teri kalam me
Raat-oo ko kare roshan tu wo shamaaye likh de |
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«Reply #12 on: February 16, 2011, 05:10:57 PM » |
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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Umda Shayar
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«Reply #13 on: September 14, 2013, 02:33:02 AM » |
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uffffffffffffff......Hay re…………………..so sweet and touching words
anamika ji……………………aap fir likh rahi he its
really good ji…………..likha aur bahot
bahot likho……….apko padne se behtar kaam
aur kuch nahi ……………lijiye kuch lines meri
taraf se for only u and ur ability…..Apni kalam se ye mahki hawaye likh de
Tu chahe to lafjo me apni wafaye likh de
Tuje chu kar Aaj kalam fir he muskarayi
Tu chahe to zindagi ki nayi dishaye likh de
Ishq like de dard likh de
Tu rasm-e-ulaft ki sadaaye likh de
Har rang he basta he teri kalam me
Raat-oo ko kare roshan tu wo shamaaye likh de bht hi mast likhe ho rajaji....... aajao yaar wapas....... missing u ...... and i knw u will read this so do contact me as soon as possible....... |
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«Reply #14 on: September 14, 2013, 02:36:14 AM » |
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Bahut Khoob,
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on eTI community..
