Aaj kar lene de shukriya tu ada

by suman59 on October 14, 2012, 06:02:52 AM
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Aaj kar lene de shukriya tu ada
Jaane kis mod par hum ho jaye juda
Abhi tak mere saath jo tu chala
Dil ye chahe, chale bas yahi silsila

chahte hum hai jo aksar, milta nahi
Ek jalak dikhlakar, kho jaata kahi
Aur yahi sach hai ki saath jo yeh mila
Ek din hoga alag, bikhrega kafila

Hum dono ho jayenge edhar aur udhar
Jaane taqdeer humko le jaye kidhar
Ruk jaye koyi, koyi jaye nikal
Us judayi mein mann hoga kitna vikal

Aaj intezar humko tu kar lene de
Beet aaye na lamha sab keh lene de
Koyi jajbaat apna bayan karta hai
Koyi dil ke kone mein daba leta hai

Is se sabit to yeh na hota mere yaar
Jo hai kehta nahi voh hai karta na pyar
Baat dil mein daba math usse aane de
Apne dil ko tu kuch halkar ho jaane de

Hum musafir hai, hoga alag carvan
Tees reh jayegi, gar kiya na bayan
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«Reply #1 on: October 14, 2012, 06:07:22 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on October 14, 2012, 06:37:34 AM
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Quote from: suman59 on October 14, 2012, 06:02:52 AM
Aaj kar lene de shukriya tu ada
Jaane kis mod par hum ho jaye juda
Abhi tak mere saath jo tu chala
Dil ye chahe, chale bas yahi silsila
Nice thinking
chahte hum hai jo aksar, milta nahi
Ek jalak dikhlakar, kho jaata kahi
Aur yahi sach hai ki saath jo yeh mila
Ek din hoga alag, bikhrega kafila
beautiful
Hum dono ho jayenge edhar aur udhar
Jaane taqdeer humko le jaye kidhar
Ruk jaye koyi, koyi jaye nikal
Us judayi mein mann hoga kitna vikal
es Vikal ka kya matlab hota hai
Aaj intezar humko tu kar lene de
Beet aaye na lamha sab keh lene de
Koyi jajbaat apna bayan karta hai
Koyi dil ke kone mein daba leta hai
Sach me ! Aesa bhi hota hai kyaa.
Ye lines bahut achchi hai.
Is se sabit to yeh na hota mere yaar
Jo hai kehta nahi voh hai karta na pyar
Baat dil mein daba math usse aane de
Apne dil ko tu kuch halkar ho jaane de
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Hum musafir hai, hoga alag carvan
Tees reh jayegi, gar kiya na bayan

Suman aunty jee aapne bahut dislkash kalaam pesh ki hai. Hamaari daad kabool farmaye
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«Reply #6 on: October 14, 2012, 01:11:53 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: October 14, 2012, 01:38:20 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on October 14, 2012, 10:17:52 AM
Suman aunty jee aapne bahut dislkash kalaam pesh ki hai. Hamaari daad kabool farmaye

Thanks masoom

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Quote from: sahal on October 14, 2012, 01:11:53 PM
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Thank you Sahal jee
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«Reply #9 on: October 14, 2012, 04:12:40 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on October 14, 2012, 04:12:40 PM
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«Reply #11 on: October 16, 2012, 03:29:29 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on October 14, 2012, 06:02:52 AM
Aaj kar lene de shukriya tu ada
Jaane kis mod par hum ho jaye juda
Abhi tak mere saath jo tu chala
Dil ye chahe, chale bas yahi silsila

chahte hum hai jo aksar, milta nahi
Ek jalak dikhlakar, kho jaata kahi
Aur yahi sach hai ki saath jo yeh mila
Ek din hoga alag, bikhrega kafila

Hum dono ho jayenge edhar aur udhar
Jaane taqdeer humko le jaye kidhar
Ruk jaye koyi, koyi jaye nikal
Us judayi mein mann hoga kitna vikal

Aaj intezar humko tu kar lene de
Beet aaye na lamha sab keh lene de
Koyi jajbaat apna bayan karta hai
Koyi dil ke kone mein daba leta hai

Is se sabit to yeh na hota mere yaar
Jo hai kehta nahi voh hai karta na pyar
Baat dil mein daba math usse aane de
Apne dil ko tu kuch halkar ho jaane de

Hum musafir hai, hoga alag carvan
Tees reh jayegi, gar kiya na bayan



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Quote from: qalb on October 16, 2012, 03:29:29 PM

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