aaj phir aap ki kammi si hai

by Pooja on October 22, 2004, 07:43:05 PM
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shaam se aankh mein nammi si hai,
aaj phir aap ki kami si hai
dafan karr do humme ke sans mille,
nabaj kuch derr se thami si hai
waqt rehta nahin kahi tikk karr,
iski aadat bhi aadami si hai
koi rishta nahin raha
phir bhi ek tasvir lajmi si hai
shaam se aankh mein nammi si hai,
aaj phir aap ki kammi si hai (NM)
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«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2004, 04:46:59 PM »
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Waaaaah! Waaaah! Bahut Khoob Pooja ji!

Band Palkon mein Ujaalon ki Tarah Hote hain,
Lamhe yaadon ke Chiraaghon ki tarah hote hain!
Yeh Chatakhte hain to man Khushbuon-sa Hota hai,
Adhkhile Zakhm Gulaabon ki Tarah hote hain!


(NM)
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«Reply #2 on: October 25, 2004, 10:39:25 PM »
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wah!!! bahoot khoob likha AKS ji apne!!!

kuch yaanden bas kanto ki tarah hoti hai
palko per bhi bithao to chubhan deti hai
Dil mai jo basao to rokati hai yah saanse
Kuch adhkhilli jaan bas yah bakshati hai
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2004, 05:33:50 AM »
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Waah! Pooja ji! Jawaab Achchha Diya hai Aapne!!Good!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2004, 04:01:41 PM »
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Shukriyan AKS JI!!!
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nishita
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«Reply #5 on: October 27, 2004, 08:58:49 AM »
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waah waah

socha tha humne usse na ab yaad karenge
apni akhon se keemti moti girne na denge
par dil ye mera meri baat na maane
lagta hai mujhe har raat satane
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«Reply #6 on: October 27, 2004, 09:31:25 AM »
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Wah!! Kya Khoob Kaha hai!! Nishita ji!

Khafa Ho Ke Kahte hain, Hamen Na Kabhi Woh Yaad karege!
Lekin hum phir bhi unse yeh Zaraa si Fariyaad Karenge!
Tum Agar Aabaad Ho Sako To Yeh Jaan Haazir Hai Hamari,
Apne Haalaat-e-Mohabbat to yoon bhi Dil Ko Barbaad Karenge!
Tumhe Khush Dekh kar aa jaayega is Dil ko Karaar,
Phir Hum Chain se is Rooh ko Aazaad Karenge!
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Tosha
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«Reply #7 on: October 27, 2004, 10:05:11 AM »
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wow pooja ji... beautiful words n beautifully sung too.
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: October 27, 2004, 02:41:29 PM »
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Wah AKS JI!!! BAHOOT KHOOB!!
Tumhe Khush Dekh kar aa jaayega is Dil ko Karaar,
Phir Hum Chain se is Rooh ko Aazaad Karenge!
wah!!! kaya shabdo ka upyog kiya hai apne!!! Bahoot achy!!

Khafa hoty hai ki, app hume manaya kare,
Issi bahanse se pass hamare ayya kare!
apki yah zara si fariyaadon per dil bahkata hai,
dil barbaad ki shikayato per man mahkata hai!!
hume khush rakhana hai to yah baat jaan jaiye
har khushi hai apse, bas app itana samjh jaiye!!!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #9 on: October 27, 2004, 06:25:15 PM »
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hausla Afzaai Ka shukriya ji Pooja ji!! glasses2  Usual Smile

Very Nice written!!!

Ab to hai Tumse Har Khushi Apni!
Qurbaan hai Tum pe Zindagee Apni!
Mohabbat ke Pujaari Hain Hum to,
Karte Rahenge Dil se Bandgee Apni!!
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immi
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«Reply #10 on: October 27, 2004, 06:31:22 PM »
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Kiya Baat hai Sharma ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: October 27, 2004, 06:36:48 PM »
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wah!!!! Bahoot khoob AKS JI!!!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #12 on: October 28, 2004, 09:13:07 PM »
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Thanx! Pooja ji!! Immi ji!
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akela
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«Reply #13 on: October 28, 2004, 09:27:07 PM »
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nice one sharmaarunkumar ji
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«Reply #14 on: October 29, 2004, 04:36:02 AM »
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Shukriya!! Akela ji!
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