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aaj phir mazzar pe diyaa jalaa gayaa
mujhko jagaakar jaane kahaN chalaa gayaa
chhoRi Thee maine duniyaa sakooN se rahegaa vo
aaNsoo giraa kabar pe mujhko rulaa gayaa
aai kaash poochh saktaa us-se dil ka haal
jaam-eN-vafaa meiN kayaa koi jafaa pilaa gayaa
jab zindgi thee saaTh na de sakaa voh saaTh
paThar se karke guftgoo rishtaa milaa gayaa
voh paas mere kitnaa maiN kitnaa us-se door
do zindgi meiN maut kaa aa khalaa gayaa
zaahid na `Ashk' ko ab to buraa kaho
riNda khudaa ka Thaa khudaa ke chalaa gayaa (nm)
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2005, 07:49:07 PM » |
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wow wow wow Pooja.................superbsssssssss
dukh dena to shayad us ki fitrat mein shamil hai
mera yeh zarf hai ke usse sajdon mein bhi dua doon
meri rooh tak to us ke hisaar mein hai
mein is se barh kar usse aur kya doon?
woh shakhs ke qadam qadam per karta raha munafiqat
magar mein chahoon ke usse umer bhar ki wafa doon
meri khushion ka qatil bhi wohi hai lekin
dil nahin manta ke usse koi saza doon
dharakta hai dil ban kar seene mein woh
tum hi kaho kaise mein us ko bhula doon
faaslon ne bhatka diya hai woh aesa to naa tha
mere qareeb kabhi aaye to mohabbat ka pekar bana doon...................nm
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2005, 08:51:47 AM » |
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Waah...Pooja n Waheed Bohot khoob !!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 31, 2005, 05:22:56 PM » |
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Thanks Waheed and Talat.... bahoot khoob Waheed!!
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«Reply #4 on: November 09, 2005, 10:41:17 AM » |
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Thanxxxxxxxxx Pooja ........... Talat...........  |
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«Reply #5 on: November 09, 2005, 04:12:34 PM » |
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very nice post poojaji & wahid ji, padkar maja aa gaya
pujaji
har line bahoot gahrai chupaye hai very nice
wahid ji ki is line ne to dil ko choo liya
meri khushiyon ka qatil bhi wohi hai lekin,
dil nahi manta ki usse koi saja doon
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«Reply #6 on: November 15, 2005, 08:15:53 PM » |
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Kitab-e-Dil pe Likhay Thay kitnay hi AfsanaY
Kuch Qisse naye Thay Aur kuch Barson Puranay
Kuch un ka zikr jo kabhi rug-e-jaan se thay Qareeb
Kuch wo jo Aaj Bhi Lagtay Hain Begaanay
Kaash Aisi koi rut koi Mausam Aaye
Khushiyon Bhare Geet Hum lagein Gungunanay
Aaj Bhi Dil Mera is Aas Pe Zinda Hai
Aik roz to Aayein Gay Wo Hum ko Mananay
Safha-e-dil ko koi Humare Parh ker dekhay
Khoon-e-jigar se likhay Hain Sab Afsanay
Guzra howa Zamana Bhula Do zehan se Apnay
Aatay nahi Loat k Beetay Huay Zamanay (nm)
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«Reply #7 on: November 17, 2005, 10:54:17 AM » |
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Thanxxx alo Bekarar................ bahot bahot shukriya aap ka..........nice again Pooja sis..:lol:
very nice line aap ne likha........
aaj bhi dil mera is aas mein jinda hai
ek roj to aayenge woh humko manane....
.beautiful lines........
Jis K Honay Sey Meeri Saans Chala Karti Thi...
Kis Tharah Us K Baghair Aapna Guzara Hoga..
Yee Achanak Jo Ujala Sa Howa Jaata Hai...
Dil Ne Chupkay Sey Tera Naam Pukara Hoga..
Ishq Karna Hai Too Din Raat Usey Sochna Hai...
Aur Kuch Zehan Mai Aya To Khasara Hoga..
Yeh Jo Deriya Mein Chala Aya Sunehri Sa Ghoroor...
Us Nai Derya Mai Kahin Paon Uthara Hoga.
Mujh Ko Maloom Hai Jyonhi Mien Qadam Rakhunga...
Zindagi Tera Koi Aur Kinaara Hoga...
Jo Meeri Rooh Mein Badal Say Garjhtay Hain Wasi...
Us Nai Seenay Mai Koi Dard Utara Hoga..
Kaam Mushkil Hai Mager Jeeth He Loonga Usko...nm
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«Reply #8 on: November 23, 2005, 08:03:13 AM » |
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great lines................pooja .............and ..............waheed
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«Reply #9 on: November 23, 2005, 03:47:07 PM » |
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THANKS ROHIT!!
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«Reply #10 on: November 23, 2005, 05:16:40 PM » |
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wow pooja jee n waheed..gr8 work....!!! juz amazing
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«Reply #11 on: November 25, 2005, 09:49:18 AM » |
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Sab Ko Posting Bahut Achhi He.....
Jin Ko Shikhaya Tha Kabhi Hamane...
Mohabbat Ki Raah Par Chalana....
Aaj Vahi Raah-E-Manzil Dikha Rahe He.......
Jis Ne Shikha tha Hum Se...Vafa Karana...
Aaj Vahi Hame Anzaam-e-Wafa Bata Rahe he.....
jis Ne Shikha tha Ham Se...Muskuraana...
Aaj Vahi Hame Hasana shikha Rahe He.....
Jis Ko Diya Kabhi Hamane Dosti Ka Najaraana....
Aaj Vahi Hame Tofe Me Dusmani Lauta Rahe He......
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«Reply #12 on: November 27, 2005, 06:03:48 PM » |
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Thanxxxxxxx Salma.......Ghayal......... nice Ghayal...
na uske dil mein mohabbat rahi baaki
phir bhi hum usko umar bhar chahte rahe
yeh kaisi mohabbat hai ai mere Khuda
jiske jindagi ki dua maanga wahi meri maut ki dua maangte rahe...........
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«Reply #13 on: November 28, 2005, 05:45:35 PM » |
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Good work Gayal and Waheed!!
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«Reply #14 on: November 28, 2005, 06:39:33 PM » |
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Tum Chaho To Mujhay Apnay Seenay Main Chupa Saktay Ho
Tum Chaho To Mujhay Apnay Dil Ki Har Baat Bata Saktay Ho
Tum Chaho To Mujhay Tapte Dhoop Say Bacha Saktay Ho
Tum Chaho To Mujhay Apnay Wajood Main Chup Saktay Ho
Tum Chaho To ek Diya Roshni Ka Jala Sakltay Ho .............
Tumhay Malom Hai Kay Yah Zinadagi Kuch Dino Ki Hai
Tum Chaho To Isay Hans Kar Guzar Saktay Ho
Tum Chaho To Mujhay Apne Zindagi Bana Saktay Ho
Tum Chao To Kia Nahi Kar Saktay ..........
Tum Chao To Sub Kuch Kar Saktay Ho ............
BusSSsS
Baat Tumhary Chahny Ki Hai (nm)
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