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Re: aaj wo taara toot gaya hay (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2010, 09:05:50 PM »

...Yet another simple and sweet, short and meaningful creation... Thanks for sharing...!!!

Jo taara toot gaya hay..., iskay jasiey aur bhi kitnay tootay hain...paida hotay hain...unki hasti ko sambhalnay ke liye chand lines...which are not mine, but yaad aayeen is rachna ko parh kay...

"Dekho inhein yeh hai onss ki boodein
Patton ki godh mein aasmaan se koodein
Angdayee le phir karwat badal kar
Nazuk se moti hasdein phisal kar
Kho na jayein yeh....Taare Zameen par

Yeh toh hain sardi mein
Dhoop ki kiranein
Utrain jo aangan ko sunehara sa karne
Mann ke andheron ko roshan sa kardein
Thiturti (sardi say kampkampati) hatheli ki rangat badal dein
Kho na jayein yeh...Taare Zameen par

Yeh to asha ki leher hay
Yeh to umeed ki seher hay
Khushiyon ki nehar hay
Kho na jayein yeh...Taare Zameen par

Dekho raaton ke seeney pe yeh tu
Jhil mil kisi lau se uge hain
Jaise kaanch mein chudi ke tukde
Jaise khilay khilay phoolon ke mukhde
Jaise bansi koi bajaye pairon ke talay

Yeh to jhonkay hain pawan kay
Hai yeh gungroo jeevan kay
Yeh to sur hai chaman kay
Kho na jayein yeh...Taare Zameen par

Kabhi baatein jaise dadi naani
Kabhi chale jaise num num pani
Kabhi ban jaye bhole saawalo ki jhadi
Sanatey mein hasi ke jaise
Soonay labon pe khushi ke jaise
Yeh to noor hai barse gar pe kismat ho padi
Jaise jhil mein lehar aye chanda
jaise bheed mein apney ka kandha

jaise kaanon mein sargam
hardam bajti hi rahey
jaise barkha udati hai bundiya…
kho na jayein yehh...
Kho na jayein yehh...Taare zameen par"

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Re: aaj wo taara toot gaya hay (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2010, 02:17:46 PM »

Thnx to you too for appreciating, understanding and for signifying the importance of a star, otherwise Moon get the whole credit usually!...

kuch long ho gayee thee, warna ismein kuch aur antray thay, poem topic say hat kar thee kuch and long bhi so had to cut it shorter, but poet has tried to compare the stars with kids here...or some masoom souls according to my own interpretation...
but general idea is about keeping the innocence and the beauty of a soul alive...


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Re: aaj wo taara toot gaya hay (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2010, 04:10:56 PM »

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Re: aaj wo taara toot gaya hay (by vb)

«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2010, 11:32:54 PM »

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Vb ji... bahut sundar...!!!


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Re: aaj wo taara toot gaya hay (NM)

«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2011, 05:35:05 AM »

aaj wo taara toot gaya
falak se dekho chaand hi ji jab se rooth gaya…

vb ji delete nai krna tha


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Re: aaj wo taara toot gaya hay (NM)

«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2011, 08:37:54 AM »

sarfira jee! puraanay zakhm ku kureedetay hain...

taaray vaar lenay say hamaaray thora he ho jaatay hain... kisi ne achhi boli lagai thi... sara maal bech diya sahab... ab ye veeraan maqbaray kisi ki milkiyat hain... yahan shama jalaanay nahi aaya kejay...


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Re: aaj wo taara toot gaya hay (NM)

«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2011, 08:50:00 AM »

vb ji…
purane zakham kabhi bharte nahi
papdiyan ukhadte thakte nahi
…………
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