AA.JAAIYE......... "MohanN"

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AA.JAAIYE

I have tried to set up this ghazal in tune with famous ghazal sung by Master Madan in 1935.
The ghazal was written by shayar Sagar Nizami.

‘Yun naa reh reh kar humen tarsaaiye,      


Taanaa.zan hai rakeeb aa.jaayiye,
Aa.bhi jaaiye eh habeeb aa.jaaiye!

Dil kee dharhkan jo sun sakte nahin,
Aaiye naa aur mere qareeb aa.jaaiye!

Tumh se wabastaa hai naseeb yeh,
Aaiye phir lekar naseeb aa.jaaiye!

Yeh log kyaa kyaa naa kehte hain,
Hai yeh zamaanaa ajeeb aa.jaaiye!

Haal-e-MohanN kuchh naa poochiye,
Aaiye mar naa jaaye gareeb aa.jaaiye!

Surindar. N
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AA.JAAIYE

I have tried to set up this ghazal in tune with famous ghazal sung by Master Madan in 1935.
The ghazal was written by shayar Sagar Nizami.

‘Yun naa reh reh kar humen tarsaaiye,     


Taanaa.zan hai rakeeb aa.jaayiye,
Aa.bhi jaaiye eh habeeb aa.jaaiye!

Dil kee dharhkan jo sun sakte nahin,
Aaiye naa aur mere qareeb aa.jaaiye!

Tumh se wabastaa hai naseeb yeh,
Aaiye phir lekar naseeb aa.jaaiye!

Yeh log kyaa kyaa naa kehte hain,
Hai yeh zamaanaa ajeeb aa.jaaiye!

Haal-e-MohanN kuchh naa poochiye,
Aaiye mar naa jaaye gareeb aa.jaaiye!

Surindar. N
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AA.JAAIYE

I have tried to set up this ghazal in tune with famous ghazal sung by Master Madan in 1935.
The ghazal was written by shayar Sagar Nizami.

‘Yun naa reh reh kar humen tarsaaiye,     


Taanaa.zan hai rakeeb aa.jaayiye,
Aa.bhi jaaiye eh habeeb aa.jaaiye!

Dil kee dharhkan jo sun sakte nahin,
Aaiye naa aur mere qareeb aa.jaaiye!

Tumh se wabastaa hai naseeb yeh,
Aaiye phir lekar naseeb aa.jaaiye!

Yeh log kyaa kyaa naa kehte hain,
Hai yeh zamaanaa ajeeb aa.jaaiye!

Haal-e-MohanN kuchh naa poochiye,
Aaiye mar naa jaaye gareeb aa.jaaiye!

Surindar. N
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